User contributions for LeanLovingWriter

5 July 2024

• 13:4213:42, 5 July 2024 diff hist +520‎ User talk:Tollens →Question from LeanLovingWriter (21:59, 1 July 2024): Reply Tag: Reply

3 July 2024

• 14:5614:56, 3 July 2024 diff hist −71‎ m Enterprise Holdings Cleaned up a couple paragraphs; sounds like a PR intern wrote it. current Tag: Visual edit
• 14:5114:51, 3 July 2024 diff hist −4‎ m Enterprise Holdings removed unneeded 'the' from a sentence Tag: Visual edit

2 July 2024

• 18:1218:12, 2 July 2024 diff hist +480‎ User talk:Tollens →Question from LeanLovingWriter (21:59, 1 July 2024): Reply Tag: Reply

1 July 2024

• 21:5921:59, 1 July 2024 diff hist +655‎ User talk:Tollens →Question from LeanLovingWriter (21:59, 1 July 2024): new section Tag: Mentorship module question

5 June 2024

• 06:3306:33, 5 June 2024 diff hist −1‎ m Lavrentiy Beria removed errant comma Tag: Visual edit

30 March 2024

• 14:3014:30, 30 March 2024 diff hist +355‎ m Polar Music Prize Added current exchange rate Tag: Visual edit

26 March 2024

• 04:2104:21, 26 March 2024 diff hist 0‎ m Colorado House of Representatives Changed 1985 to 1895 [typo] in 'Women who served' section Tag: Visual edit

10 March 2024

• 16:4316:43, 10 March 2024 diff hist 0‎ m Victor Gollancz Changed ‘all Germans were not guilty’ to ‘not all Germans were guilty’ Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

2 March 2024

• 17:4217:42, 2 March 2024 diff hist +184‎ Talk:Maria Pevchikh →Cutline of photo: new section Tag: New topic

26 November 2023

• 22:5822:58, 26 November 2023 diff hist −2‎ m Longstreet (TV series) Removed unnecessary parentheses Tag: Visual edit
• 22:5622:56, 26 November 2023 diff hist +95‎ m Longstreet (TV series) Corrected name of writer Mark Rodgers Tag: Visual edit
• 22:5422:54, 26 November 2023 diff hist +95‎ m Longstreet (TV series) Changed the spelling of writer Mark Rodgers [added the 'd'] Tag: Visual edit
• 22:4822:48, 26 November 2023 diff hist −36‎ Longstreet (TV series) Longstreet had at least two things in common with Kendrick's character; my edit reflects the closer relationship. Kendrick article says Longstreet creators said it was based on Maclain, so there's no need, and it might be incorrect, to imply little in common with a literally and specifically credited source material. Tag: Visual edit

25 November 2023

• 19:0219:02, 25 November 2023 diff hist +54‎ Julie Payne (actress, born 1940) Added domestic partner Steve Luckman to her bio box, per cited info in PERSONAL section Tag: Visual edit

18 November 2023

• 01:1901:19, 18 November 2023 diff hist +1‎ m Securitas AB added missing quotation mark Tag: Visual edit

17 November 2023

• 23:1023:10, 17 November 2023 diff hist +292‎ m Ralph Lauren David Lauren and Lauren Bush Lauren have three children [per the latter's Wikipedia page]; updated the line and cited to same item as from her entry. Tag: Visual edit
• 22:5922:59, 17 November 2023 diff hist −9‎ m Ricky Lauren Cleaned up clunky intro, combining pursuits, retaining reference. Tag: Visual edit
• 09:0609:06, 17 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ m The Card Counter fixed em dashes Tag: Visual edit
• 09:0409:04, 17 November 2023 diff hist −1‎ m Master Gardener (film) isn't loaded Tag: Visual edit
• 09:0209:02, 17 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ m Master Gardener (film) no hyphen needed for '-ly' adverbs Tag: Visual edit
• 09:0009:00, 17 November 2023 diff hist +13‎ m Paul Schrader not 'latter' which is used when talking of two items, but 'the last of these,' which refers to a just completed list [the list may not be comprehensive overall, which is why it's the last of THESE. Tag: Visual edit
• 08:1908:19, 17 November 2023 diff hist +3‎ m Perceval Press 'in' Tag: Visual edit

15 November 2023

• 02:4702:47, 15 November 2023 diff hist +82‎ John Ritter Added phrasing on the movie Real Men with Jim Belushi to strengthen the feature film paragraph. Previously it was a single sentence of just four. Tag: Visual edit

25 October 2023

• 15:3515:35, 25 October 2023 diff hist +6‎ m Ward Bond adjusted sentence on second marriage Tag: Visual edit

24 October 2023

• 16:5516:55, 24 October 2023 diff hist −1‎ m William Devane deleted comma Tag: Visual edit

23 October 2023

• 21:4521:45, 23 October 2023 diff hist −39‎ m Tom Selleck Cleaned up sentence on AAG Tag: Visual edit

18 October 2023

• 22:0322:03, 18 October 2023 diff hist −4‎ m Al Lettieri deleted 'had' where unneeded ... is citation required on this sentence when filmography is on the same page? There's only one other film Lettieri was in between the two and Brando wasn't in it. Hence, The Godfather is the second time they worked together. Tag: Visual edit
• 22:0122:01, 18 October 2023 diff hist +121‎ m Al Lettieri Added IMDB citation for death Tag: Visual edit

9 October 2023

• 01:3301:33, 9 October 2023 diff hist +29‎ m Run All Night (film) Added actors in parens Tags: Reverted Visual edit

7 October 2023

• 03:1803:18, 7 October 2023 diff hist 0‎ m Kaya Scodelario 'she' not 'her' ['same neighbourhood as *she*' — as in 'same neighborhood as she (did)' Tag: Visual edit

29 September 2023

• 18:4018:40, 29 September 2023 diff hist +18‎ m Mary Lee Settle Slight improvements to PEN acronym sentence and Faulkner with the 'n' not Faulker ... a missing period in the sentence on the last the five-book list. Tag: Visual edit
• 08:1208:12, 29 September 2023 diff hist −1‎ m PGA European Tour Standardized references to "million" ... kept initial "US$" first reference as the establishing point ... a couple hyphen issues and one or two of passive voice ... Tag: Visual edit

28 September 2023

• 04:1904:19, 28 September 2023 diff hist +161‎ m Ralph Cosham 'TV mini-series' ... 'first narrator' not 'only' ... added a sentence with citation, noting the new Audible narrator of the series, from 2015 to present [2022 is the most recent audiobook, the 18th in the series]. Tag: Visual edit

15 September 2023

• 19:3819:38, 15 September 2023 diff hist +340‎ Hugh Jackman Jackman and his wife's separation. Cited to CNN [footnote 94 at this time] Tag: Visual edit

12 September 2023

• 00:5000:50, 12 September 2023 diff hist +452‎ Sidney Sheinberg Added requested citation, to NY Times article, justifying the statement that the two men had transformed MCA. Tag: Visual edit
• 00:4200:42, 12 September 2023 diff hist +129‎ m Lorraine Gary Added citation for "In Search of an Artist" [currently Note No. 3] Tag: Visual edit

9 September 2023

• 02:5402:54, 9 September 2023 diff hist +300‎ Colleen Camp Added reference with citation to fact that Knock Knock [which she co-produced and appeared in] was a remake of the 1977 Death Game in which she also appeared (as noted in the first paragraph). Tag: Visual edit

5 September 2023

• 08:1808:18, 5 September 2023 diff hist −22‎ m Jhumpa Lahiri condensed ending of sentence on husband's roles at TIME. Tag: Visual edit
• 08:0708:07, 5 September 2023 diff hist +287‎ m Jim Lovell made parenthetical remark freer-flowing part of sentence; added NYT citation to Chicago Tribune one, both edits for Marilyn Lovell's death. Tag: Visual edit

2 September 2023

• 01:5401:54, 2 September 2023 diff hist 0‎ m W.B. Mason The intro said 70 distribution centers; the conclusion says 60. Changed 70 to 60 to be sure both are correct and match. Tag: Visual edit
• 01:5201:52, 2 September 2023 diff hist +8‎ W.B. Mason Moved the trademark lawsuit to a pre-existing empty section "Controversies" ... this focuses the "Ownership" section on ownership and puts a lawsuit under Controversies Tag: Visual edit
• 01:4701:47, 2 September 2023 diff hist +1,687‎ W.B. Mason Added Pandemic Pivot paragraph with Wall Street Journal citation [their interview of Meehan] and buttressed trademark infringement paragraph with citations to Boston Globe and Reuters and clarification that Nixon Peabody was WB Mason's law firm in the case. The baseball section cd do with expansion — Mason is official supplier to MLB, I believe, works with nine teams not three, and has signage in Camden Yards, and perhaps other stadiums. Tag: Visual edit
• 01:0301:03, 2 September 2023 diff hist −1‎ m W.B. Mason the word is "longstanding" unless it's meant that Leo was upright for a great while without sitting down. Tag: Visual edit
• 01:0201:02, 2 September 2023 diff hist 0‎ m W.B. Mason plural possessive of "Greenes'" — assuming Steve was the son of both parties in the marriage. Tag: Visual edit
• 01:0101:01, 2 September 2023 diff hist +742‎ Talk:W.B. Mason →Article rehabilitation: Reply Tag: Reply
• 00:5600:56, 2 September 2023 diff hist −17‎ m W.B. Mason 2011 isn't 10 years after 1997. Tag: Visual edit

1 September 2023

• 16:1916:19, 1 September 2023 diff hist −4‎ The Guilty (2021 film) No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 16:1016:10, 1 September 2023 diff hist −6‎ True Detective No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 16:0716:07, 1 September 2023 diff hist +5‎ True Detective No edit summary Tag: Visual edit