User contributions for Jorjulio

23 September 2024

• 17:3617:36, 23 September 2024 diff hist +2‎ m Server (computing) ‎ In first sentence of article, replaced "on computer network" with "on a computer network". current

21 September 2024

• 18:4218:42, 21 September 2024 diff hist −1‎ m Dhyana in Buddhism ‎ In first sentence of the article, removed the comma following "sense-impressions", inserting "and" in its place, and removed the "and" just before "leading to". current
• 18:1518:15, 21 September 2024 diff hist 0‎ m Mindfulness ‎ In the second to last of the introductory paragraphs, replaced spaces in "physical health related" with hyphens. current

17 September 2024

• 03:1803:18, 17 September 2024 diff hist +2‎ m Algerian Arabic ‎ Under "Hilalian dialects", made sure that periods are set at the end of reference notes 11 and 12. current
• 03:1203:12, 17 September 2024 diff hist −3‎ m Algerian Arabic ‎ Under "Hilalian dialects" heading, lowercased "Includes" (was immediately following "Eastern Hilal dialects:") and fixed period setting at the end of the bulleted material at "Central Hilal dialects".
• 03:0203:02, 17 September 2024 diff hist +5‎ m Algerian Arabic ‎ Under "Dialects", made changes to capitalization, spacing, and punctuation (periods), but only through the material under "Hilalian dialects".

15 September 2024

• 13:0813:08, 15 September 2024 diff hist +4‎ m Modernity ‎ In the last of the introductory paragraphs (before the heading "Etymology"), added "Fr." before the italicized "modernité" (in parentheses) to add clarity.

7 September 2024

• 02:3202:32, 7 September 2024 diff hist +20‎ m Rust (programming language) ‎ In second paragraph, linked "enums" to Wikipedia's "Enumerated type" article.

21 August 2024

• 14:4614:46, 21 August 2024 diff hist +572‎ Talk:Digital nomad ‎ →‎capitalization of "internet": new section Tag: New topic

15 July 2024

• 03:4103:41, 15 July 2024 diff hist +771‎ Talk:How Democracies Die ‎ →‎three possible edits under "Synopsis", "Recommendations of the authors", "Reception": new section current Tag: New topic

29 June 2024

• 19:5219:52, 29 June 2024 diff hist +1‎ m Munro Leaf ‎ Under "Early life", set a period at the end of the sentence "Leaf studied at the University of Maryland ..., graduating in 1927".

27 June 2024

• 14:1914:19, 27 June 2024 diff hist +5‎ m Eikaiwa school ‎ In the article's second paragraph, in the text "Many parents send their children to these schools in the hope of improving their child's hopes of higher education", I changed "hopes of" to "prospects for". This avoids the close repetition of the words "hope" and "hopes" and (I hope!) makes for a slight improvement in the expression of the intended meaning.

26 June 2024

• 20:0620:06, 26 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ m Talk:Clifford Brown ‎ →‎This edit only involved capitalizing the first letter of the title. current
• 20:0320:03, 26 June 2024 diff hist +408‎ Talk:Clifford Brown ‎ →‎first mentions of Sonny Rollins: new section Tag: New topic

2 May 2024

• 23:4723:47, 2 May 2024 diff hist −2‎ m Surveillance capitalism ‎ Under heading "Response", in the last sentence of the first paragraph, changed "preventative" to "preventive" for consistency. (Both were used in this paragraph.)

21 April 2024

• 01:5801:58, 21 April 2024 diff hist +1‎ m Grant Stewart (musician) ‎ In first sentence, set a comma after "Ontario".
• 01:0901:09, 21 April 2024 diff hist +427‎ Talk:Product design ‎ →‎first sentence seems not to parse: new section current Tag: New topic

12 April 2024

• 15:1515:15, 12 April 2024 diff hist +318‎ Talk:B. Alan Wallace ‎ →‎"Allan" vs. "Alan" (summary box): new section Tag: New topic

19 March 2024

• 18:1018:10, 19 March 2024 diff hist −1‎ m Saturated and unsaturated compounds ‎ Under the "Organic chemistry" heading, removed the comma from the text string "carboxylic acids, (unsaturated)". current

29 February 2024

• 15:4715:47, 29 February 2024 diff hist +1‎ m Enlightenment in Buddhism ‎ In the final sentence of the paragraph under "Nirvana", changed "Muller" to "Müller".

21 February 2024

• 14:1814:18, 21 February 2024 diff hist −5‎ m Chris Lightcap ‎ Under "Career", in second paragraph, final sentence, removed "been" from "have been appeared".

20 February 2024

• 20:4120:41, 20 February 2024 diff hist +22‎ Economy of Russia ‎ In introduction, second paragraph, final sentence, replaced "with 36 in 2020 as compared to 39.8 of the USA. in 2021" with "with a Gini coefficient of 36 in 2020 as compared to 39.8 in the USA in 2021." NOTE: *If the cited figures do not represent Gini coefficients, please correct.*

4 February 2024

• 18:3018:30, 4 February 2024 diff hist +4‎ m Chris Lightcap ‎ Under "Career", first paragraph, second-to-last sentence, made "Andrew D'Angelo" a Wikipedia link.
• 18:2418:24, 4 February 2024 diff hist −3‎ m Chris Lightcap ‎ At the end of "Career" section, changed "and Tom Harrell and others." to "Tom Harrell, and others.

31 January 2024

• 20:5020:50, 31 January 2024 diff hist −5‎ m MacOS ‎ Under "History" and "Development" headings, right after link to "Carnegie Mellon University", removed "and" along with the single spaces to its left and right, retaining comma just after. (This was one edit, in one place.)

27 January 2024

• 19:4419:44, 27 January 2024 diff hist +4‎ m Babbel ‎ Under "Podcasts", changed "crafted" to "created". In same paragraph, after "Italian," changed "the" to "with" and "cater" to "catering".

17 January 2024

• 04:0504:05, 17 January 2024 diff hist +9‎ m Incremental validity ‎ In final sentence of first paragraph, replaced "answer if the new test adds much" with "determine whether the new assessment adds". If other editors find that the "much" I removed was important, feel free to restore it.

16 January 2024

• 03:2503:25, 16 January 2024 diff hist −64‎ Daniel Goleman ‎ Edited first paragraph under "Career". Consolidated mention of "Emotional Intelligence" to one occurrence in last sentence, preserving all links and setting a period after the first sentence.

13 January 2024

• 12:2912:29, 13 January 2024 diff hist −3‎ m Daniel Goleman ‎ Corrected my previous edit, fixing reference citation by removing "[3]".
• 12:2512:25, 13 January 2024 diff hist −32‎ Daniel Goleman ‎ Rearranged second paragraph under "Biography", retaining factual content but changing order of schools attended and improving the language. (Earlier version included "with PhD in Clinical Psychology ...")

5 December 2023

• 13:5113:51, 5 December 2023 diff hist +13‎ m Brendan Eich ‎ Under "Netscape", in the sentence beginning "He completed the first version", replaced "was called Mocha" with "the language was called Mocha" to improve sense and grammar.

22 September 2023

• 02:4902:49, 22 September 2023 diff hist −65‎ m Dzogchen ‎ →‎Base, Path, and Fruit: Removed the note about this section being empty, as it no longer is. Left two line breaks between the "Base, Path, and Fruit" heading and the subordinate one immediately following. Please fix if needed. Tag: Reverted

15 September 2023

• 17:2017:20, 15 September 2023 diff hist +1‎ m Jenni Hermoso ‎ In first sentence of second paragraph (of the article), changed "continuing onto" to "continuing on to".

25 August 2023

• 18:5518:55, 25 August 2023 diff hist +15‎ m Data ‎ In second sentence of third paragraph, set a comma after "including" and linked "statistics" to the "Statistic" article (note singular).
• 18:4118:41, 25 August 2023 diff hist −41‎ m Data ‎ In last sentence of first paragraph, replaced "which can be used in such a manner in order to capture the useful information out of it" with "from which useful information can be extracted".

22 August 2023

• 01:0001:00, 22 August 2023 diff hist −1‎ m Mental health ‎ In last sentence of introductory paragraph, changed "yourself" to "oneself".

14 August 2023

• 13:0413:04, 14 August 2023 diff hist +4‎ m Friedrich Nietzsche ‎ Under "Life" and "Youth", in first sentence of third paragraph, added "the" immed. before "Domgymnasium".

14 July 2023

• 23:3023:30, 14 July 2023 diff hist −2‎ m Deep web ‎ Removed hyphen from "Computer-scientist" in first paragraph. Also, in first sentence under "Terminology", changed "with" (immed. after "deep web") to "and".

16 June 2023

• 14:3814:38, 16 June 2023 diff hist +1‎ m Gary Snyder ‎ Under "The Beats", second sentence, set a comma after the link to "University of California, Berkeley".
• 14:3114:31, 16 June 2023 diff hist +1‎ m Gary Snyder ‎ In last sentence of introductory paragraph, set a comma after the link to "University of California, Davis".

15 June 2023

• 14:3614:36, 15 June 2023 diff hist +1‎ m Pandas (software) ‎ In last sentence under "DataFrames", set a comma after "library" (right before the link to "NumPy").

10 June 2023

• 18:0218:02, 10 June 2023 diff hist +4‎ m Solvation shell ‎ Placed and around "solution" at end of first sentence. Tag: Disambiguation links added
• 17:5917:59, 10 June 2023 diff hist +14‎ Solvation shell ‎ Added "in a solution" to end of very first sentence.

23 May 2023

• 14:0814:08, 23 May 2023 diff hist +28‎ m Encapsulation (computer programming) ‎ In last sentence of first paragraph, made "state" link to article "State (computer science)".

20 May 2023

• 19:4119:41, 20 May 2023 diff hist +1‎ m B. Alan Wallace ‎ In final sentence of paragraph immediately prior to "Selected works", set a comma after "Italy" and hyphenated each of "first person" and "third person".
• 19:2919:29, 20 May 2023 diff hist +1‎ m B. Alan Wallace ‎ Under "Early life and education", in the last sentence of the paragraph immediately following this heading, set a comma after "India".
• 19:2519:25, 20 May 2023 diff hist 0‎ m B. Alan Wallace ‎ Edited code at top of file (just beneath "{{Infobox person"), simply changing the lowercase "w" in "wallace" to uppercase.

1 March 2023

• 15:1215:12, 1 March 2023 diff hist −28‎ m Revenue ‎ Correcting duplication with hyperlinks in last edit ("In accounting ... at the very top.").
• 15:0815:08, 1 March 2023 diff hist +25‎ m Revenue ‎ In first paragraph, broke sentence "In accounting ... at the very top." into two sentences to improve readability while retaining semantics.

30 November 2022

• 03:0103:01, 30 November 2022 diff hist −6‎ m Edsger W. Dijkstra ‎ Under "EWD manuscripts" (near middle of paragraph), changed "Dijkstra distributed photocopies" to "He distributed photocopies".