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July 21

[[Tajiks] - needs wikification. Roozbeh 22:12, 21 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Making Period Mail. Not written encyclopedically.

List of leading legal cases in copyright law and "Category:U.S. copyright case law" - should be unified. Sorry, I can't seem to wikilink the category quote I gave above. Tempshill 21:15, 21 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Duffy Stirling - vanity page

Steve Whitmire horrible unwikified stub on a puppeteer. Dunc_Harris|☺ 20:14, 21 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Barry Kay - uniwikified.

Dr. Shyama Prasad Mookerjee and Sir Ashutosh Mukherjee - enormous, rambling, horribly POV. Almost VfD candidates.

• • At a minimum, they need to be moved to titles that don't include Dr. and Sir, in compliance with Wikipedia standards.

Panoramyk dict. def. of a neoligism

Pascal Robitaille notable? -I'd say no - Sidney (too lazy to login ;-))

Phrase samples, context, encyclopedic?

HP-38G - needs wikification. Also, it's written as a review, and is not informative. Roozbeh 14:29, 21 Jul 2004 (UTC)

• I wikified it and (hopefully) made it read less like a review, but it could still use some work by someone who knows more about HP calculators than I do. zztzed 20:23, 21 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Battle of Guadalajara needs rewriting in colloquial English. GreatWhiteNortherner 12:50, 21 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Nogay language - on Tatars that emigrated from Romania. Nothing on the language itself. [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]] 12:49, Jul 21, 2004 (UTC)

Isoko North appears to actually be about a town. Move? in any case, needs cleanup. - Kenwarren 12:21, Jul 21, 2004 (UTC)

Flexichron wtf is this? Is it encyclopedic? vanity? Dunc_Harris|☺ 09:19, 21 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Burtnieki messy article, messy merger, messy redirects, author had language/spelling issues

Berkut - Ukranian special forces. wikify. Dunc_Harris|☺ 01:16, 21 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Pashtunwali - Needs links, NPOV, correcting of vowel-less deity names and other idiosyncratic spellings; contains self-contradictions. - Various edits and wikifications, still needs much work... --Eequor

How to care for a pet cockatoo was listed on VfD consensus to keep but needs TLC

XML schema and XML have complementary content on the same topic. The information in both is accurate and fairly well-written (if I do say so myself), but a merger is probably warranted. Complicating matters is the need for disambiguation from W3C XML Schema, formerly XML Schema (I moved it today), and the fact that the current disambiguation strategy may not be canon. See Talk:XML schema. - mjb 08:59, 21 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Nikola Tesla - Many links in this article seem to justify the existence of articles that are, in some cases, little more than dictionary definitions, or that do have long entries but that really don't need to be linked to in irrelevant prose ("photographs of the bones of his hand"; many other common nouns). Is there a policy for this sort of thing? - mjb 09:09, 21 Jul 2004 (UTC)

July 20

TLAs from AAA to DZZ, TLAs from EAA to HZZ, TLAs from IAA to LZZ, TLAs from MAA to PZZ, TLAs from QAA to TZZ, TLAs from UAA to XZZ, TLAs from YAA to ZZZ - Are these pages really necessary? Peter O.

List_of_Freguesias_of_Portugal, List_of_cities_in_Brazil - The creators of these pages meant well, but does every municipality need to be linked? Likely these lists have been generated. Perhaps providing an external link will save space. Peter O.

Slovene_grammar - Very comprehensive. Should be sent to Wikibooks. Peter O.

History_of_the_Scots_language Has many texts that may be better placed in Wikisource. Peter O.

Rosh Hashana Arab Assault - The Oslo War?

Franco German locomotive -- needs lots of works, contains many factual errors and idiosyncratic terms, someone with historical and political knowledge about Europe should go through -- Tillwe

Patrick Nuo - unwikified

Nadine Coyle substub

Magnetic tunnel effect - needs A LOT of work to make it meaningful. But would have to come from somebody familiar with this topic.

Multistate Bar Examination - needs work

Fratton, Hampshire: Short article needing wikification

Grosses vollsätndiges Universal Lexicon Aller Wissenschaften und Knste welche bishero durch menschlichen Verstand und Witz erfunden und verbessert worden - unwikified

Ok, I think I've sorted this out: there was a shorter, more concise article on the same subject, I've moved that to the correct German title [[Grosses_vollst%E4ndiges_Universal-Lexicon ]] (title may need translating) and redirected everything there. Ianb

Robert Randall, substub on a paedophile; also see Walton Hop. Verify, POV, etc. Dunc_Harris|☺ 19:10, 20 Jul 2004 (UTC) - also Robert Randall Hay - Dangerfield, Tom Paton and [[Robert Randall see special:contributions/81.152.163.166 Dunc_Harris|☺ 19:15, 20 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Security policy apparently you really need one. Unwikified mess/instructive style - may be copyvio. Dunc_Harris

Wkox - Substub, should be "WKOX." 50kW AM station in Massachusetts - Lucky 6.9

Qashqai language - needs copyediting, format, more info. Bluemask

Elgordo - atricle in Spanish. Ocon | Talk 16:47, 20 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Now listed on Wikipedia:Pages needing translation into English. Thue

Grass carp - wikify and taxobox Bluemask

Coursing needs work. [[User:Meelar|Meelar

Red Bee - some comic character. Fmt, wikify, grammar. Lupo

Lumidee - sub-sub-sub-stub. Needs everything. Lupo

East Chop - wikify. Thue | talk 14:19, 20 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Cleaned Up, is there a category for only known locally boats and ferries. Giano

Stage Hand Publishers, LaHave, N.S. - wikify, refactor, check notability

Robert Dew - current version reads like his personal homepage, not an encyclopedic article. Thue | talk 10:31, 20 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Apparently (from google) he is Director for Continuous Improvement for the University of Alabama, if this makes him notable, then this article need a more detached approach by some-one who knows something about him. Giano 15:42, 20 Jul 2004 (UTC)

reads more like a bad joke. This is vfd fodder; moving there. Ianb

Discreet combustion some jargon-waffle about a computer program, but it is also offensive; I have no idea. Dunc_Harris|☺ 10:11, 20 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Have cleaned up, no longer offensive, I don't understand a word of it, probably wants deleting.Giano

Ankhesenamun style etc.

Bunghole - needs work

Instrumental guitar - unwikied, kinda messy. blankfaze Ballet - An excellent article that needs expansion. Peter O.

RACA and all it's related pages need verification, POV-ectomies, copyright status checking, wikification, amd merging. see RACA index of articles. +this looks like someone's pamphlet - can't find it on google but it's awful as it stands. Secretlondon

Lach - A band, apparently, and I almost speedied it, then almost VfD'd it, and now I wonder if it should perhaps be salvaged. Not much use in its present condition, I'm afraid. UninvitedCompany

Internet censorship in Tunisia - needs verification and fmt

July 19

Framekiller - substub on a common JavaScript technique, needs wikifying, proofreading, possibly better title - or merging into a Javascript article. Ianb

Velvet Mayhem - Pretty obviously not written by a native English speaker, plus needs a lot of work

Mary Lou Finlay - nothing there, pretty much.

Passive Obedience - wiki, clarify meaning

Axe (deodorant) - possibly the shortest sub stub ever written...

Maquis Forces International, minor Star Trek fan-club

Mel Cocha. in Spanish

Meldersnet, a self described small computer networking club

Mindtree Consulting, ad

Micron Technologies, ad

Michelle Marder Kamhi, notable?

More_words_in_Papiamento, wiktionary?

Beaumanor & Garats HaY Amateur Radio Society - paste from their website. Thue | talk 15:47, 19 Jul 2004 (UTC)

F M Khan - is he notable? If so, wikify, else put on VfD. Lupo

Invision Power Services and Invision Power File Manager - look very much like advertisment for the company and its products to me. Lupo

URINT - start over from scratch. Lupo

more about URINT here

Amusing Ourselves to Death -- split out from Neil Postman article, as it is his most important stand-alone work -- both need lots of work to bring grammar, spelling, general exposition up to scratch

Utility color code - context (in what country/city are these colors used? Are they standardized internationally? (I don't think so!), incomplete sentences. Lupo

Muskeget - fmt, improve language, context, wikify. Lupo

Arash - would need serious research on Iranian or Persian mythology to cleanup; otherwise delete. Lupo

Parducci - copy/paste move by anon to Corrado Parducci needs to be redone properly. Lupo

Fish finder - major copyedit Ocon | Talk 05:37, 19 Jul 2004 (UTC)

• Had a look, its a proposal for a wikipedia fish finder, a set of questions such as "what colour is it?", that let you identify unfamiliar fish, similarly to 20 Questions. Also, proposes similar schemes for trees and sheeshells, and other stuff.
  • generally properly known as a taxonomic key. Dunc_Harris|☺ 19:19, 20 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Hodmezovasarhely - unwikified, needs copyediting, is it copyvio? Looked on Google, didn't find anything, but large, instant unwikified texts scare me. Fastfission 04:01, 19 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Shri Mataji Nirmala Shrivastava - Seriously POV

Pashtun - rather POV and subjective, lacking depth, and not all that well written - Jmabel

• started some editing, but could use more. especially from an expert in the field. Marlowe

July 18

Ron Joyce - needs wikification and NPOVing

Castlemilk glasgow - needs work and a new name

Belly of the Beast--is this a movie?

Samanid - needs work

Muscle fatigue - single sentence stub. Needs a lot of work.

Goldenberg - needs copyedit into encyclopedic style

Kerowyn - substub

Crimson Avenger, Phantom Stranger - a mess. Copyvios?

Blake Bradley - needs wikification AND some context -- what game/show/book/whatever is this from?

Poland's betrayal by the Western Allies failed to reached consensus for deletion, requires cleanup/NPOV -- Graham ☺ | Talk 20:31, 18 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Fumoto no iro needs verification. Andrewa

Raymond Ferguson a rapper. possible copyvio, but I can't find it. otherwise half-POV rant, etc needs a rewrite. Dunc_Harris|☺ 19:07, 18 Jul 2004 (UTC)

PunkBuster Doesn't really get into the specifics of the PunkBuster program. Also, rather sloppily worded. -- Kwekubo Rewrote it and added info. Might still need a check of the spelling. --P.S. 21:41, 18 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Commission of Array is this a copy vio? the whole article consists of 2 cited quotes

Combined Operations Museum stub for a now-closed museum

CMBoK what is this? all links are dead

Clear soup recipe

• Doesn't need cleaning--move to VdF? Is there a policy on recipes yet? -- Bishonen
  • Recipes are to be transwikied to the wikibooks cookbook, except if they are a notable national dish. Dunc_Harris|☺ 19:37, 18 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Claude Lise no context, Appears to be a french politician

Ambition (card game) - a lot of PoV & unattributed rumor, freshly added by an anon. Libelous if false?

Bill DeMott - either ad or vanity, not sure which. either way prolly deletable.

Madocians - unwikied. blankfaze | (беседа!)

Alderson disk - unwikied, other than that it's a fine article. blankfaze | (беседа!)

redirected and copied 1 sentence from Alderson Disc

Software engineering demographicsNeeds to be wikified...but it looks like some of it might be copyrighted.

Alka Yagnik - POV, style

Sultan Murad - unwikied and needs to be merged into Murad II. blankfaze | (беседа!)

Vladimir Mayakovsky - Bad Russian; ????s and ASCII scattered all over. Golbez

July 17

Kardes Turkuler appears to be an automated translation from Turkish.

Bruges cathedral, Bruges city hall, Bruges belfry - someone's holiday snaps. Nice photos, need a bit of commentary (and page moving?) -- Graham ☺ | Talk

Rebecca Levin do we accept murder victim sub stubs? vfd?

The announcement of the Academy of Persian Language and Literature looks weird and needs work. Discussion about use of Persian or farsi for a language. -- Chris 73 | Talk

Saksoft - ad; also Saksoft's the only company listed in Outsourcing

Alfa Romeo 156 - Needs major cleanup and wikification + Added some wikification, still needs work. Kenwarren

Alpenscooter Advertisement, POV. delete --K. Sperling

• moved to Wikipedia:Votes for deletion. Ianb 22:48, 19 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Dead and gone a record label, but who have only released 6(!) albums. I think VfD... 12:34, 17 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Renaissance and Enlightenment medicine -- substub

• I've got to ask: Given the fact that this is properly a massive, massive article & combines the Ren. with the 18th c., which ought not be done, is there a point to having this placeholder? A fair article on just the Enlightenment would go 32K (breakdown of prohibitions on cadavers, circulation of blood, germ theory vs. vapor theory; then we get into obstetrics in the period; then we get to fertility). Geogre 22:01, 19 Jul 2004 (UTC)

27Mhz CB27/81 Bandplan. No context.

• put on vfd. Ianb 07:32, 20 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Managing Urban America - Reads choppily. Needs general work, too many quotes.

All pages at Special:Whatlinkshere/User:Michael/Dispute. I have watchlisted these to make sure Michael doesn't remove the notice. They will all need fact-checking, and some will need removal of Michaelese. Guanaco

thermite synthesis -needs better formatting and general cleaning/editing, -could be combined with thermite

Desire (album) - substub

Propagandhi - notable?

Alan Lowe - any chance we can get the name of the city he's the mayor OF? +done (what links here is your friend) Secretlondon

Beargins, Scrapped Princess, Lord Beknam - a real mess

Erick Erickson - needs editing (five stages of what?) and is a little NPOV. - Similar to Erik Erikson. Poccil + Histories are merged; Erick Erickson is now redir but some of its former text, now on Talk:Erik Erikson should be wikified & enc'ized & probably added in. (Thank you to wise user who added {{merge}} to the article, which can help speed attention of sysops who can preserve both of the histories.) --Jerzy(t)

Paul Henry and Prosper Henry - the article could probably do with another name, but besides that, the links to the Obituaries have meaningless names.

July 16

finished mathematics - ironically, this article needs work - it's not an accepted term in the field, probably overdue for renaming or merging somewhere Charles Matthews

Insular area - Intro paragraph makes no sense, is ungrammatical, and the meaning is lost on me. The list is fine, though. Abqwildcat 23:33, 16 Jul 2004 (UTC)

cleaned up, but would feel more comfortable if someone with knowledge about insular areas double-checked that I cleaned it properlySalasks 02:56, 17 Jul 2004 (UTC)

JALIC, ad

Jeff Gerhardt POV, famous?

Jens Martin Skibsted notable?

JudgeMeHarshX, notable?

strawberry - needs wikifying and refactoring.

Lyudmila Ulitskaya - unwikied, messmess blankfaze

Wikified and tidied, translations and Russian spellings should be checked Giano 10:58, 17 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Tatyana Tolstaya - unwikied, messmess blankfaze

Cleaned Up, still a bit wooden, needs a Russian Speaker to check translations. Does anybody know what 'A Slynx' is? Giano 10:29, 17 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Suggest somebody checks the 2nd paragraph with original, not convinced I've correctly interpreted what the author was really trying to say Giano 10:34, 17 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Cleaned some more, but Russian speaker still wanted. Slynx is a neologism for a fabulous animal, I think, going by Amazon review of the novel.-- Bishonen

Twisted Tales of Spike McFang--what is this?

• Kiddie-wiki. It's on VfD now.

Southern All Stars - messy and also a little POV at the end.

ISO 3166-2:SO - needs some type editing/wikification

Catahya - wikify, etc.

July 15

Bone tumor - substub.

Bhandup - substub, any Indians around?

Real-time tactical - encylopedic or not? any gamers? substub anyway

Delegated legislation - unwikied blankfaze | (беседа!)

Atwater-Kent Municipal Museum - unwikied, messy blankfaze | (беседа!)

Kira Yamato - unwikied blankfaze | (беседа!)

Privilege - verging on dicdef, second half doesn't make much sense

Completely re-written but still pretty horrible. Should be in a dictionary Giano 13:45, 16 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Dedede - more unwikified video game stuff

Copper extraction - Needs wikifying and a better introduction.

Nan Keohane - copied from here (Duke's website), but even if it's allowed, needs wikifying

Armpit hair--needs somebody to add more info (a pic would be nice as well, if anyone's bored at home). [[User:Meelar|Meelar (talk)]]

Jagjit Singh - article makes insufficient explanation of notability.

Palmarian Catholic Church - a mess, possibly a copyvio

Ertra, Ertra, Ertra - needs an English translation

Tom Smith (filker) - since the article doesn't bother to explain what filking is, perhaps move to Tom Smith (singer) or Tom Smith (musician)?

fyi - Filk music

I know what filk music is, but the article (at least at the time I listed it here) didn't explain it.

National-Religious - really needs another title.

Raymond domenech sub-stub, unwikified and unclear. Rmhermen 22:16, Jul 15, 2004 (UTC)

Peritoneum - detailed but confusing Salasks

Computronium and compuform--is this real?

• Moved to Vfd. This is waffle: fit a computer into an atomic particle? JFW | T@lk

Ford Fiesta and Ford Escort - Need cleaning up after a lot of anonymous contributions.

Fiat Stilo and [[Renault M%E9gane Sc%E9nic]] - Both need Wikifying and NPOV.

Cutter (baseball) - not about the pitch, but about a Yankees pitcher.

Toledoth_Yeshu - totally incoherent - copied directly from Sources about Jesus Christ

Sousveillance and inverse surveillance need merging and dePOVing

Javier Solana - wikify.

Patsy Keever - wikify, NPOV. Thue | talk 15:43, 15 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Dataflow analysis - transwiki to wikibooks. Thue | talk 15:31, 15 Jul 2004 (UTC)

PostScript FAQ - transwiki to wikibooks. Thue | talk 15:05, 15 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Water - "Thermochemistry" information in table "Properties" on right site doesn't display properly in IE6 (->sub tags) -- Fabian Haidekker

Cutting Stock Problem - just a cut and paste from a (public domain) website. Not wikipedia style/format. Thue | talk 14:25, 15 Jul 2004 (UTC)

ETOM - "that is fast becoming" indicates POV text. wikify. Thue | talk 14:19, 15 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Zeroption is an unformatted band--probably article-worthy, but needs work. [[User:Meelar|Meelar (talk)]]

Monkey tennis is this real, or nonsense?

Listing on vfd. Thue | talk 14:07, 15 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Tried to vote to delete, something is not working Giano 18:27, 15 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Kombato - ad, could be an article I think. Thue | talk 13:35, 15 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Lord Refa - POV, irrelevant Klingon references, etc. This Babylon 5 character could have good encyclopaedia content written about him, but this isn't it. --AlexChurchill 11:16, Jul 15, 2004 (UTC)

Sanguma - rewrite. Thue | talk 10:29, 15 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Yehuda Amichai - substub. Thue | talk 10:26, 15 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Holonymy - substub. Thue | talk 10:26, 15 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Hezbollah - consists mainly of paranoid rants and other bizarre stuff. needs expert work to seperate genuine allegations about this group from schizo crap

Sorcerous Stabber Orphen - needs MUCH work

Sememe - a sentence. I imagine this could be more than a dictionary definition. Secretlondon 04:03, 15 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Ivy King - unwikified slab of text

wikified+edited majorly; was originally copyvio (see external link on page), but I don't think it is anymore. Salasks 13:14, 16 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Lithuanian mythology - list of things, mess

Laukpatis - substub

Laukų Dvasios - naming issues

It's that single-dotted "e" again. [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]] 15:38, Jul 15, 2004 (UTC)

Firmenich - substub. seems to be legit topic though

Manor Records - great photo, no text.

More than a week old

July 14

Al Sobrante - wikify

Sangeeta Bijlani - substub. Thue

Cadet Glider Badge - substub. Thue USS American Legion plain text copied from public domain source Bkonrad

Keaton about a fictional yellow fox(!) Probably ought to be reserved for a town of the same name. Dunc_Harris

Lucinda Lambton unformatted. Peter O.

Little Roger and the Goosebumps - unformatted. Peter O.

Lithology - definition. Peter O.

List of Bulgarian football teams - should be moved somewhere. Peter O.

Laseractive, Latte art - sub-stubs. Peter O.

Knights of St. George, Knights of St. Joseph - unformatted. Peter O.

Fons Trompenaars stub. Peter O.

Biogeochemistry unwikified, copyvio?

cleaned up and wikified; could use further editing by someone who understands Riemman physics. Author uses Russian spelling, so if it's a copyvio, which is doubtful, you're not going to find it Salasks

Firangoji Narsala unformatted. Peter O.

RAF Pembrey Sands - bit of an unwikified mess, copyvio? Dunc_Harris

Liz Willows substub. Notable? Dunc_Harris

Cksum - substub

Alfonso Salmeron - long, unwikied probable copyvio. blankfaze

Peter Faber - long, unwikied probable copyvio. blankfaze

All new pages started recently by User:Spl2, some might be vfd or merge candidates (I fear) -- Graham ☺

Fatima Zahra - wikify, possible copyvio, general work. First few lines seem okay, the rest I just don't know. --Golbez

STS-59 needs updating, tense changes ~

July 13

Militaryphotos.net - needs work

it's protected from changes right now Salasks

Jim Boeven - needs A LOT of work

Pleasant Valley State Prison - Charts need to be written into sentences, NPOV Guanaco 22:12, 13 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Modern_anti-Semitism - This article was moved back to its own page after it became unmanageable as a section on Anti-Semitism. It already has an NPOV template but the material is extremely skewed or incorrect; since I no longer wish to make edits to it I invite others to take a look.

World's funniest joke - encyc'ize; i did a little moving it away from column-filler tone and precision, but probably screwed up some facts, having done no research w/ the many refs. Jerzy(t)

Heiner Benking - mess

Video game industry practices needs NPOV - perhaps we could incorporate this into video game industry?

The Groke sthg to do with moomins. Dunc_Harris

Also First King of Shannara. [[User:Meelar|Meelar

Jerle Shannara. a bit of a mess; about a fictional character in some dragon-slaying type world. Dunc_Harris

The Wishsong of Shannara--unwikified block of text seeks caring, gentle Terry Brooks fan for romantic walks, friendship. [[User:Meelar|Meelar

RORO ferry dicdef. Dunc_Harris

Peace of Vereeniging - transwiki the source, first paragraph is a stub needing context. Lupo

Paul Pantone - wikify, context. Lupo

The Jocks and the Geordies, Peter's Pocket Grandpa unwikied, - These are all from The Dandy William M. Connolley

Ram Muay - unwikied, smells copyvio-ish, maybe? blankfaze

Stefan Weber - substub, but his band passes the Google test

Robert Addison Needs a Canadian who knows what the hell this boring man was about Giano

I Hear Ya! Records: wikification; NPOV; maybe even check if it's legit. Noisy

also has redirects Jonathan Smith, D.C. Scorpio, EU (band), Rare Essence; only thing i found on google for "I Hear Yeah" (missp) was this but Rare Essence is real Salasks

July 12

Sim racing - needs work

Shutter glasses - needs work

El Dorado (myth) - part of the text from a 1636 account (see [1]), POV ("demon which they worshipped as their god and lord" for instance). The text from the 1636 account should either be marked as such or cleaned up.

Cloudgate Dance Theater - expand or delete.

Bode Miller

The Elfstones of Shannara - looked like a copyvio, but I can't find it. Unformatted, unwikied and is just one gigantic paragraph.

Grandes Éxitos (Shakira), Pies Descalzos (Shakira), The Remixes (Shakira), MTV Unplugged (Shakira), Live & Off The Record (Shakira) - All are just tracklists, needs more, anything more.

Rice.mag - copyedit, maybe integrate into De La Salle University-College of Liberal Arts

De La Salle University-College of Liberal Arts - copyedit, better title consistent with wikipedia style

Training manuals - survived vfd but requires cleanup

Maastricht Aachen Airport - survived vfd but requires cleanup

Painkiller Magazine - unwikified, copyvio?

Weston_Reserve_University - unwikified, not sure if this belongs on List of diploma mills - There is such a thing as Case Western Reserve University, a respected B&M school. Is this misspelled, or an attempt by a diploma mill to confuse employers or even students? Jerzy

July 11

Montserrat national football team - terrible substub, I moved it here from Speedy deletions because it's a legit topic

The Sword of Shannara - Needs some wfication, and some general editing.

Carputer - mostly bullet points, external link DOA, smells copyvio, possible vfd candidate

Mexico national football team - needs much work

Team Xtream - Looks and reads like it's straight from a WWE fan magazine.

Cashflow matching - definition; poorly written. Peter O.

Frisco Soccer and Entertainment Center - needs some prose. And is the current home of the Frisco Soccer and Entertainment Center really the Cotton Bowl? Methinks that is the current home of the TEAM, not the center.

• Same thing with Rapids Soccer Stadium. In fact, see all of the contributions by [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/wiki.phtml?title=Special:Contributions&target=12.216.168.133 User:12.216.168.133, all of which are nothing but collections of statistics with no sentences.
• The guy has been warned twice and some "contributions" are copyvios. He's been listed on the vandalism page.

Omarion - Needs wikification, NPOVing

Jan Lorenc--smells like copyvio, but can't find on google. Needs cleaning. Meelar

Alice Guy Blache - wikify, copyvio?

Dean Cogan - slightly POV. Peter O.

Setupbuilder - too ad-like

Gentiva Health Services - too ad-like. I assume the country referred to but not specified is Kyrgyzstan. Thue

Politics of Georgia - muddle of sections straight from the CIA factbook and not-awfully-well-written paragraphs with a bit of a Georgian nationalist POV

People of Columbia University - lists of names need to be alphabetized, some NPOVing needs to be done, titles should be italicized, names which have no explanations need explanations, links to other Wikipedia articles need to be included.

Ho-Am Prize in Mass Communication - A stubby random page I found. Would anyone research this short-lived award? [[User:Poccil|Peter O.

MetalGarurumon - unwikified stub about a "Digimon". --rbrwr

John F. Kennedy - needs a lot of NPOV work (specifically President of the US and Assasination section). History Channel has recently released a documentary about Kennedy's time in office, could be used as good reference. --Localizer

July 10

CheilJedang Group - unwikied stub about an Asian business group - blankfaze

Sintaluta freshly created but - oh, so stubby. Noisy

Aarhus Airport survived vfd, but requires cleanup - see talk

Viva Forever - Excessively POV

Modified. Poccil

Right opinion could be clearer, more formatted, more explanatory; about Plato's philosophy.

Joel Minnick Longenecker survived vfd but requires cleanup: see talk

London Guildhall University - substub

Smudja - wikify. "is well on his way of becoming the most famous [...]" - vanity? Thue | talk

Kenneth E. Boulding wikification required, looks like a copyvio but google can't find it anywhere. -- Graham

Hysteresis (electric) - wikify. The text doesn't seem to define the term properly, but that may just be me not reading it right. Thue

• There exists already a rather good article Hysteresis which covers the topic in more detail. Pjacobi

John Dhani Lennevald member of a Swedish pop group, A-Teens. Other claim to fame is Sharing a birthday with J-Lo!?! Dunc_Harris

Multivalued dependency - looks like valid info, but the article is a complete mess

Duchsustus - needs wikification & clarification by someone familiar with Talmud?

previously listed here on May25th, but the {{msg:cleanup}} tag was removed without any cleanup or wikifying done ... i'll put back the {{cleanup}} tag now

July 9

Sonic Underground - unwikied, rambling kiddie-wiki

This needs to be deleted and rewritten. Much of the information here is incorrect; character names spelled wrong ("Manik" ->Manic), series first aired in 1999. Rhymeless 23:47, 9 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Cosmo connor, Shabba Ranks from User:Griasr -- Rhobite

Concealed ovulation survived vfd but still requires cleanup

Douglas McGregor needs formatting

Armaros needs context

Chinese box -- needs fact-checking and re-writing.

Organizational structure & Organizational development -- would be nice to have some more descriptive text &/or explanations.

Meizhou wreads as if written by the local tourist board Giano

July 7-8

Nagarjuna template problem. I am listing this here as well as Wikipedia talk:Template messages

Perperuna - no complete sentences, many impenetrable abbreviations -Sean Curtin

history of parapsychology - needs NPOV & wikification -Sean Curtin

Net flux - not wikified

• Now wikified - I think this should be included in the article "membrane" - MGM

Vampire lifestyle - survived VfD, consensus among those voting "keep" was to send to cleanup. How it can be cleaned up, or if it's possible, is beyond me. -Sean Curtin

It was a very contentious VfD debate. I think the consensus, such as it was, among the "keep"ers was that some stripping and huge clarifying that this is a fantasy/belief/cult/make believe thing is ok. Not sure, but it was just barely a keep by my count. I think people wanted outside references added, too. Good luck to all you brave souls who undertake it. Geogre

It would be a waste of anybody's time doing anything to this, only one place for it, and it's not on Wikipedia Giano

I'm pretty saure that several of the people who voted "Keep" never looked at the section of vampire that makes this article redundant. If this page is still on cleanup by September it should be placed back on VfD. -Sean Curtin

While I don't participate or personally know anyone that participates in such, I'm aware that it is a real phenomenon, sophisticated enough to be called a subculture. I think it does deserve an article, and more than the little snippet on vampire. Let me clean it up, and then see what you think. PMC

Government of Ashmore and Cartier Islands - needs wikified

Hayato Kobayashi and Fraw Bow - huh?

No Limit Records - substub

Art rock Devolves into incoherent jottings; dubious claims here, too.

• Did a little cleanup. Marlowe 15:48, 9 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Beatification - miles and miles of stuff from The Catholic Encyclopaedia of 1914 which went through hardly any edits. Needs trimming, resizing and transformation into a Wikipedia article.

Working on it now. I've been knocking the dust off those 19th c. sentences & wikifying as I go, but it's a tough slog. Geogre 13:17, 9 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Afro-Brazilian - unwikied. blankfaze

• Wikified the page and removed "contributed by" text from the end of the text d2s

Binder clip - unwikied, kind-of silly. - blankfaze

Brazilian jiu jitsu - many commented sections in text

Temperate and Temperate climate. - Confusing stubs. Could be merged? Krik

Carlos Lacerda - unwikied stub, not well written. blankfaze

The Giraffes Very poorly written to the point that it is almost nonsensical.

Taurus bass pedal synthesizer - looks like a cut-and-paste, but I can't find it. Obviously incomplete, no wikis, POV comment at the end. Similar article from same user deleted as nonsense. - And no article on Moog Music either.

It would be nice if there were an article on Moog that covered the man, then one on the company that could cover their various enterprises, which includes a list of bass synths. A solo, nonsense, article on one pedal doesn't seem like a good clean job. Geogre

Semantically loaded Author complains about his poor writing in article ;)

The Verlaines - NZ music band. Wikify, more context, dates. Lupo

La Polla Records - fan article about a Spanish band. Mentions something about "repression from the Spanish government", but doesn't explain it any further. Lupo

Robot rock - dicdef wannabe. Merge into Queens of the Stone Age and delete. Lupo

Mount Barker - unwikified substub

Multilingual Speech Input/Output: Assessment, Methodology and Standardisation - unwikified, no context, cut'n'pasted from a website, although I think the source is public domain

Anti-globalization movement - see talk, but there are many assertions, peacock terms and weasel words that need fixing. Also, fact checking needs to be done. This article has potential. - Ta bu shi da yu

Quantum meruit - unwikied stub. blankfaze

Ketogenic Diet mostly not on the diet but musings on why it isn't scientifically accepted

People empowerment - crummy mccrummitycrum. unwikied. blankfaze

Dishwashing - this just seems rather silly. I think it might have potential, but right now it's a tongue-in-cheek how-to and some made-up acronyms, along with congenial advice to the would-be dishwasher. SSherris

More than two weeks old

July 6

WestCat - needs wikificaiton. Maybe VfD?

Azerbaijanis - needs work. "Most Azeris are businessmen"?

Scrapped Princess - unwikied. blankfaze

Majlis-i-Shoora - unwikied, poor english. blankfaze

Culture of Ghana - unwikied, possible POV. blankfaze

Octaban - unwikied stub. blankfaze

Memetic lexicon Needs intro, work on POV, query licence position (see end)

Kohar University of Science and Technology - unwikied. blankfaze

Stephen Lee Morgan - unwikied, possible copyvio. blankfaze

13 JG 52 - unwikied, stub. blankfaze

Council of Four - context

Dollhouse - copyedit, wikify. Lupo

39th GLBT - travel guide. Needs a rewrite & wikification. Lupo

Tomasz Krakowiak - obscure Polish musician. Lupo

Humanitarian Intervention in Kosovo - unwikied, not a copyvio (author seems to have posted it), but a hopelessly POV essay written for a school assignment. needs massive rewrite or deletion. Lupo

The Music and Art of Radiohead - Its a book I think, but needs massive cleanup.

Nathaniel Crisp - unwikied, possible copyvio. blankfaze

Henry I of Hesse and Otto I of Hesse - unformatted & unwikified genealogical data with no context.

B3ZS - Needs qualification before technical details.

UP 737 - Some public domain information about a train pulled near-verbatim from a website. Unwikified. grendel|khan

National Front for the Liberation of Corsica - unwikied. blankfaze || ••

Myristicin - stub and general mess

High Fidelity Magazine - unwikified stub

Accrued interest - signed, unwikified essay

Scientific enterprise - formatting is all over the map, article repeats a lot from, say, scientific method, and reads more like an incoherent rant than an encyclopedia article. There's some interesting stuff here but it's VERY hard to make any sense of, what with the majority of it being small sentences, strangely indented, and without much connection to one another (and lots and LOTS of re-definitioning which can be accomplished better by adding wiki links). --Fastfission

Bait loop - unwikified and poorly written as a how-to Mindspillage

July 5

Way Down, Hound Dog, and The Wonder of You- badly formated and uninfomative, Elvis singles.

Politechnika Gdanska - unwikied, substub blankfaze

AYSF - substub, might even be deletable as uniformative. blankfaze

- needs work - In fact, all of the work by User:66.119.34.39

Oxegen - music festival. POV edit+ more info. Looks like copyvio of advert, but I can't find it. Dunc_Harris

Vagueware - ad-like. Poccil

Schreck ensemble -Unwikified, but has a VFD tag that hasn't been used.

Route distinguisher - unwikied. blankfaze

European Decency threshold - wikify, context, povectomy. Lupo

Higgins - fmt, wikify. Lupo

Lustmord - short fan page about an obscure musician. Needs massive povectomy. Lupo

Balanus - Unwikified

Alex Hirka - wikify, fact check; note that vanity pages about one Alex Hirka (Torridzone Igloo) have been on VfD several times. Lupo

Dcinside - wikify, fact check. Borders on an advert. Lupo

Franz von Werra - poor English. Lupo

Atlach Nacha fact check.

Dundela FC Major cleanup needed

Ramakant rath horribly POV. Dunc_Harris

Ringer rambles, is this really encyclopedia material?

Fumoto no iro - seem to be a joke, or just vandalism

Eric Radloff accurate? important?

Temptress Moon - mezzessityess. about a movie, Chinese, I believe. unwikied. blankfaze

Special Activities Division - mess. no references.

Statism - About to roll off Cleanup, and it needs cleaning. Really, it needs severe paring, rather than serving as a platform for outlining the libertarian debate. Geogre

July 4

Two Dogmas of Empiricism - almost thought it was a joke. Rambling, unwikified, possibly copied from somewhere. Open at your own risk. - Not a joke, but not an article, either. It seems like someone's summary of W. V. Quine's book. Any Pragmatists who know Quine? Geogre

Joze Ciuha - unwikified, very possibly a copyvio. blankfaze

Frederick Sleigh Roberts - needs wikification, NPOVing. Looks like it was copied from somewhere.

Christian views of women - one great big mess of non-NPOV material, quotes Biblical phrases but doesn't look at context, has many weasel terms and could really do with better balance and factual accuracy. I listed it on VfD, but people want to keep so I figure that I'd better list it here! - Ta bu shi da yu

Japan Society of London–Needs initial description

User:80.97.179.142, contributions Roman mythology substubs. They are linked to by Roman mythology, so I presumed they were legitimate. Dunc_Harris

Ngchesar - unwikified substub, poss/prob even an Speedy deletion candidate. blankfaze

Music of Palau - yeah, i think we have a trend here. blankfaze

Culture of Palau - pretty much same deal as Culture of Tajikistan - blankfaze

Culture of Tajikistan - one giant lump of unwikified MESS. blankfaze

Ricardo Sanchez - update, the guy's no longer there

Inverted narcissist - original research, badly linked and referenced, fossil (move to inverted narcissism as well?) JFW

July 2-3

Subramanya Bharathy - tone all wrong, needs NPOV Secretlondon

grass card game needs wikifying -Sean Curtin

Stone Gossard, needs prose

Cooperation quotient - non-encyclopedic style; rambling; the amount of information conveyed is actually rather small. Architeuthis

Zeljko Raznatovic -NPOV and format names because Slobodan Milošević is not linking like Slobodan Milosevic

List of Karachi colleges - format

Chen Palmer & Partners - needs wikification. Copyvio?

Crew 21 not an article

Meesons Lane, Grays unwikified, needs context

Sin Nombre unwikified

Daniel Shersty - POV so thick you can eat it with a spoon; also, not sure if encyclopedia-worthy at all. Architeuthis

Irish Republicanism: looks like the article needs a full rewrite (not NPOV). Marknew

Fusilier unwikified

Everybody Hates Ned Flanders should be combined somewhere

Measurement in quantum mechanics - I think this is a mess but I lack the skills to fix it. Someone who knows QM well might comment (William M. Connolley

High Rise - reads like copyvio, slightly POV, hardly any wiki links. Dunc_Harris

H.O.P.E. - basically nothing but external links and links to Wikipedia articles. Get rid of that and what's left needs wikification.

Surety bond unwikified

The Law of Success hmm?

Ghost car needs explanation.

July 1

Box - rather too gushing and florid for my tastes, also may need fact checking, and wikifying, copyediting, etc

Guided by Voices - was listed here and deleted even though cleanup has not been accomplished.

Slavoljub Penkala - copy ed; changing name doesn't naturalize; all batteries have anodes, so WTH is an "anode battery"?, etc.

Whole wheat flour - do we have article already? pos copyvio too? Dunc_Harris|☺ 17:15, 1 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Alice in Wonderland (1951 movie) needs NPOV, formatting, wikis

Pankrác place in the Czech Republic

Michael Johns - Since being created on March 28 has had 135 edits, nearly all by 8 IPs that fall into probably 1 or 2 (or, barely conceivably, 4) related groups; the rest, except 1 by User:Editor (with 3 edits total), are by familiar reg'd users. The article has been placed on WP:CU 5 times (and tagged 6 times), and spent a total of about 14 hours there, on May 30-31 and June 9-11. With one exception (where a reg'd user who removing the tag now thinks they made a mistake), Cleanup tag and listing have been taken off by one of these IPs, User:Editor, or (his only edit) User:RobM., claiming when challenged that all the problems have been fixed. Since the first placement on CU, the result has been these changes. My initial concerns were imprecision and some obvious PoV liberties. At this point, i think the pattern of protecting the article from review indicates the need for close scrutiny by a political-science specialist with a track record of NPoV work on WP, on the theory that an "asset" being so heavily "defended" is likely to have PoV too subtle for my inspection (which has, in fact, been quite cursory). Jerzy(t)

Liberal, Democratic and Reformers' Group -substub

Sidiq Koya - PoV language is mostly more careless than partisan.

Troop engagements of the American Civil War, 1861 - needs wikification

The Alternate Asphygmo-Pyramidal Syndrome - this was listed once before, the author insists on deleting the cleanup header from the article without doing any cleanup, and insists that the article is perfect. RickK

• Give it 7 days; if primary editor and any specialists (anatomy & physiology course might suffice) available fail to make it comprehensible to educated lay people by then, VfD. Jerzy(t)
• posted at Wikipedia:WikiProject Clinical medicine under "Work to do -- Cleanup". -- PFHLai

Neposedi - A knowledgeable Russian should fill in the gaps. Poccil

MavicaNet appears to be a self-promotion. Poccil

Marie Marvingt - wikify. Poccil

Maria Berenice Dias - Brazilian advocate of women's and same-sex rights, looks terrible. Poccil

Natural Rights theory - couple of lines about a topic covered better elsewhere (e.g. Human rights), should maybe be merged and made into a redirect?

Fait accompli - just a definition. Poccil

EZ publish - promotion. Poccil

Bernhard Knipperdolling- wikify, format, copyvio?

Erick Reyes - notable person? Poccil

DWG - substub, incomprehensible. Autodesk file format. Seems to have potential. Poccil

Dengar - Move to The Empire Strikes Back. Poccil

Ryan Drummond - stubbish kiddie-wiki. More than passes Google test.

June 29-30

Mr Buu and Chaozu are kiddie-wikis about Dragon Ball Z characters. Unwikied, unformatted...icky.

Most of Mr Buu is in Buu and Buu Saga - someone just needs to scan for any other new content in it, and then make it a redirect to Buu, I think. —Stormie

Pedro Sarmiento de Gamboa unformat, wikify (looks like copyvio? - google can't find it)

self-harm to breasts and sexual organs - at least this one admits it needs cleanup.

Intact Day & Genital Integrity

Tristen Citrine - substub. Mindspillage

Contributions of [2] - unwikified, no idea about relevance (Harrie Skinner for example gave 4 google hits, two of them from meta.wikipedia.org (sic!).

Blakiston's Fish Owl, Japanese Scops Owl - copyedit, wikify, taxoboxes

Christian Panucci - substub

Sean Danielsen, Derek Gledhill, Ryan Martin - not wikipedia format

Carrie Chapman Catt - rambling, unformatted

Franco German locomotive - bizarre. Reads like a copyvio, but no Google hits and has nothing whatsoever to do with a locomotive. - Lucky 6.9

Found this source, however can't decide whether it's a copyvio or not. The term "Deutsch-französische Lokomotive" (for the franco-allemand alliance in the early stages of the emerging Europe) has been a quite common metaphor... --Palapala

Deleted most of the article, since source of copyvio is an alternate history page describing an European history that never was, despite the common metaphor. -- till we ☼☽ | Talk 22:15, 20 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Jean Dufresne - substub on a chess book rather than a person.

E.F.A. Gaunt - unwikified - blankfaze

Black People's Convention - besides needing wikification, it's a POV rant

Varvara - unwikified. blankfaze

Battle of Bannockburn - Format issue. There's a table and a couple of images ... the question is how to get a left margin or gutter between the text of the article and the table to prevent the article text abutting the table; and how to get the two images centred beneath the table, rather than right aligned.

Tokomaru bay - Bad article about a bay in New Zealand. Needs to be wikified and tidied up, as well as moved to Tokomaru Bay. blankfaze

N. Jan Davis - port from NASA website about some sort of director or something. totally unwikified and totally unformatted. blankfaze

Working cocker spaniel - writing is a bit muddled, but POV is a concern. Geogre

Job Training Partnership Act - totally incoherent, a cut'n'paste from a government site, with no mediation. It seems like Wikisource.

June 27

Class War POV such as "oppressive Thatcher Regan axis strangled world trade"

I did some, but I'd like others to check to see if I didn't do enough. The article spills over into club history and refers to the VfD'd "Critical Mass" article. Geogre 02:32, 28 Jun 2004 (UTC)

USS Northampton (CLC-1) - Empty table.

SIZB importance?

Sid McMath - nominate this man for sainthood

Actually, yes. What is the CU you want? Big blobs may be taken from hagiographies, maybe copyvio, but the guy's record is pretty sterling. Geogre

I'd like to see less adoration and more neutral language. RickK

Foo-Foo - verify.

Homer Lea - odd blank spaces, overly gushing

Worlds Fittest Man unwikified

Rahul Mahajan

Corrado - mess, mess, mess, unwikified too. blankfaze

Railroad chronometers -- this is presumably about the USA? Dunc_Harris

SKS M59/66 (Yugoslavia) - wikify

I've added a few links, but the article still sounds very colloqial. Sorry, I'm a bit tired right now, so to be completely honest: I'm too lazy to fix the rest right now -Frazzydee

Aaron Lufkin Dennison wikify, research. Dunc_Harris

BellTestLoopholes appears to be a newbie article on something to do with Electron spin resonance. Dunc_Harris

Pvpforums importance? vfd

Types of companies import (make it more list like or article style?)

Quarto do Chefinho importance? vfd

Uberhack for Total Annihilation importance?

Lebanese Forces and Samir Geagea - need copyediting and wikification

Borjijite - bit of a mess, but there's some stuff in there well worth cleaning up. If you're searching for further info it seems that the name is also transliterated at "Borjigit"

John Grinder, Richard Bandler - Important figures in their field (the founders of NLP, but the Grinder article is mostly just two opposite unattributed opinions and the Bandler article one opinion. -- Jmabel

Atom probe - needs help from someone who knows about materials science.

June 26

Human behavior - needs work

Capixabas needs copyedit

Tupac Shakur - very breezy, fannish style. Should reference the subject by his real name, not calling him "2Pac" or "Pac" as if he was the author's friend.

I wikified, edited, and shortened the first two parts. Menace II Society can prolly be deleted.

Peugeot 307 - Needs wikifying, NPOV.

Drakensberg hiking - Needs formating

Cause célèbre - dictionary def -- > wiktionary

Mimico, Ontario - needs NPOVing

Marguerite Yourcenar - needs work

Indecent assault was on vfd, cleanup recommended in discussion. Wile E. Heresiarch 21:28, 26 Jun 2004 (UTC)

New Age music was on vfd, cleanup recommended in discussion. Wile E. Heresiarch 21:07, 26 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Toby Riddle, American Indian chap. Dunc_Harris|☺ 20:18, 26 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Dv sidekick needs work, sentences

Fatal Frame

Volker Grassmuck poor language

Stiffening capacitor unwikified

Consumer behaviour wikify, context, NPOV

Rajni Kanth POV, unwikified

Tractography unwikified

Some pasting from websites, too. See http://www.mch.com/doctors_caregivers/physicians/radiologyStudies/tractography/dti.htm for the second section. It may be by permission. Geogre 12:34, 26 Jun 2004 (UTC)

The Higher Technical Examination Programme (HTX) and Higher Commercial Examination Programme (HHX) - what country are we talking about?

Denmark (what links here is your friend) - still needs wikification. Secretlondon 14:02, 26 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Food Not Bombs - NPOV Peter Hendrickson

June 25

Alfonso de Borbón Dampierre - unwikified, messy - blankfaze | •• | •• 05:48, 26 Jun 2004 (UTC)

• I started to wikify this, but don't think the facts are accurate, even if they are it has to be POV. Giano 15:17, 26 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Mar Shimun XIX Benyamin - needs a wikify + NPOV....and it may be copyvio. Rhymeless 03:00, 26 Jun 2004 (UTC)

XML Data Binding - just a link

Fresh Gear substub. Dunc_Harris|☺ 20:26, 25 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Robin Bush - does this needs its own article? Merge elswhere.

Hamid Etemad - needs wikification

Benaiah Biblical character substub. Dunc_Harris|☺ 18:35, 25 Jun 2004 (UTC) + Expanded (Smerdis of Tlön)

Corporation - Feudal Europe hmm?

• Oh dear, oh dear. I'll try to neuter it with what I know from history. If economists want to put opinions back in, they can. Geogre 00:25, 26 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Cowlick - extremely stubby. Can this be more than a dicdef?

Yes, but I think its a type of plant. Dunc_Harris|☺ 17:37, 25 Jun 2004 (UTC)

• It's not a plant; it's a hairstyle. I tweaked it and connected it to another definition of follicle phenomena I wrote myself, the widow's-peak. The Iconoclast

Londo Bell context? and Ra Cailum

They seem to be, yet again, a cartoon thingie presented as if real. As best as I can tell, they belong to the Gundam stuff, so if there are Gundam people reading this .... Both articles are presented in present tense, as if real, and right in medias res Geogre 17:23, 25 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Clop Another Gundam thingie

Garden designer contentless

Sarawak Progressive Democratic Party - went through VFD, vote was to keep, but basically it's crap, and needs to be made into a proper article on this party.

Korean adoption - moved from WP:CP; needs wikification, copyediting, etc. now that permission to use has been received (see article talk page). --Diberri | Talk 18:51, Jun 25, 2004 (UTC)

June 24

Mercury Cougar - stubbish, incomplete. Fellow FoMoCo guys, heed the call!

Nyc2600 - hacker group, lots of Google hits. You'd think they could have written a better article, though. No wikis, very POV, non-encyclopedic, lots of inside references. VfD?

Milotic - Pokemon creature. Lots of info, but needs de-kiddie-wikifying and useful wikis added.

Ion N. Petrovici feels like translation, needs comprehensification. Also someone who knows Romanian might want to merge/demerge with ro:Ion N. Petrovici.

Have anglicised and made slightly more comprehensible. Needs more work and ideally merging with ro:Ion N. Petrovici. User:Conte Giacomo

Tigernmus context?

Irish pagan worship. I've done a clean, but if there are experts on pre-Christian Irish worship who can be NPOV, there is probably more to say. Geogre 17:33, 25 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Madden NFL 2004 unwikified, style

Fiat Bravo - needs wikifying

Wikified, needs some NPOV – PlatinumX

now has _some_ NPOV, but needs another look. Also, expansion? -- Lisa Paul 08:30, 27 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Ismail acar paintings unwikified, probably bad title (at least caps), content doesn't really fit with title as is.Niteowlneils

Going for Broke (film) - unwikified, POV. Reads like a movie review, but doesn't come up as a copyvio.

Moved from Going for Broke. Yeah, I'm a fiend about this stuff, but prevention is better than cure. I'll wikify, too, for what it's worth. Geogre 11:19, 25 Jun 2004 (UTC)

List of hardcore punk bands - unwikified, nonformatted... redundant?

Redundant and impossible. There were hundreds and hundreds of them. This list is mostly LA, but there are all the Minneapolis, DC, NYC bands, and then there are those from the non-major centers, then there is the UK, and then there is the question of what the point of this list is hanging off in space like that. Geogre 16:54, 24 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Battle of Kock awful / Some one has put in a lot of work. Needs a lot more!

Gianni Agnelli unwikified - reverted to wikified version

Joseph Epstein awful

Extremely confusing. Which name is he known under? Anyone familiar with 20th c. Poland? Geogre 13:19, 24 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Silas Marner wikify

Now in copyvio, so cleanup isn't possible. I know the novel well & will wait until the copyvio is over to write a de novo article. Geogre 11:01, 24 Jun 2004 (UTC)

-It's also a favorite novel of mine. Whoever's handling this one, don't forget to mention that "George Sand" was actually a woman writing under a man's pseudonym, and that Steve Martin acted in/directed a modernization called "A Simple Twist of Fate". This is also the title of a Bob Dylan song. Crossref, crossref, crossref. --The Iconoclast

- I wonder if we should use "Warning: Plot details MAY follow" on this page. -- towo

I do tend to forget that Steve Martin movie, but I wouldn't forget Marianne Evans. Geogre 02:00, 25 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Watch lists wikify, context

Robotron arcade wikify + wikified, not much content

Al-Tawhid Wal-Jihad wikify, context

Jameer Nelson importance? NPOV

if you were from Philly you'd know

Simon Phillips is an article on a drummer. An anonymous user replaced the contents entirely. I think there are two unrelated drummers of this name, I've edited the article crudely to include both of them, but someone with knowledge of the area could improve it hugely.

Fire breather I discovered that this page was redundant only after I created it (see Fire breathing).

Shoot! I kind of wish it weren't a redirect, since, according to Shelby Foote, "fire breather" is a term in use in the US Civil War to refer to the secessionist politicians before the war. The term is also generally used for ranters, too. Don't know if these usages are worth an article, esp. since it would be historical dictdef, but it's worth thinking about. Geogre 01:57, 25 Jun 2004 (UTC)

June 23

Boa knot has a plethora of headers with a few words in it. It's poorly arranged, and looks very messy. + article was cleaned up by Ed Cormany; Below comment still relevent. -Frazzydee

Check out Category:knots, it contains several articles which need improvement.

Gear ratio looks like it has soem good info, but it's pretty much entirely unformatted. And the English is choppy.

Sonny Napolitano wikifty

unf dicdef, but possibly more? Dunc_Harris|☺

Dratini, Dunsparce and Victreebel require wikification. see Talk:Dratini

Waterboarding I have no idea. Dunc_Harris|☺ + Wish no one had ever thought of it. Now wikified and contextualized a bit. Probably a stub now. Geogre

Mudita dicdef.

Claire Foss and loads others see:

• Allan Warnke
• Rick Barsky
• Magnus Thompson
• Will Arlow
• Alex Kreider
• Walter Aolari
• Ian Woods
• Carla Marie Dancey
• Ken Fernandez

contribs

Shawn Allen Berry - needs a lot of work.

Allen Jones - wikify.

Starlogo substub

Lateral marks pos copyvio?

Kohl's - verify, need social significance otherwise VFD it. - The article is awful, but major department store chains get entries, and this is a major US chain. I certainly wouldn't miss either the article or the store, but it does seem more of a CU than a VFD or SD candidate. However the article should exist at Kohl's Department Store, and Kohl's should be a redirect to it. (Sorry for being wordy.) Geogre - I see no reason why it shouldn't exist at Kohl's. Dunc_Harris|☺ - My argument is more about ignorance. I don't know if there are other "Kohl's" things out there, like "Kohl's Third Equation" or "Kohl's Star." I felt that the store entry, if one is to exist, ought to be as precisely named as possible to avoid future problems. (E.g. my objection to "Lakeside School," below: there are dozens of schools by the name, and "Lakeside School, Oregon" would solve the problem.) Geogre - In which case link to (Kohl (disambiguation)]]; if there is a Kohl's equation it will be linked to by that. If there is something called Kohl's and Kohl's only, then it can be moved then. So yes, Lakeside School needs to have a comma, place, but not this one. Kohl's is probably their tradename. (this should go on its talk poage btw) Dunc_Harris|☺

Preschool education has a rewrite, but needs more.

Symbolics seems to repeat itself; also some overlap with Lisp machine.

Bosco/Gurin substub about a village.

METEOSAT wikify, deorphan

Urs E. Gattiker wikfy, context

Cell structure wikify, poss copy vio

HP-21S wikify, context

Binn wikify

David Hestenes wikify, context, importance?

Catmon, Cebu wikify, context

People's Labour Party wikify

New Town, Tasmania wikify, NPOV + Have attempted to clean up this one. I've removed the cleanup tag from page, will leave here for a few days before deleting. Chuq [5 Jul]

The Green Glass Door wikify, context

Stefan Pernar importance? Vanity page

Andre Gunder Frank wikify, expand

Kill or Cure (film) wikify, expand + Moved from Kill or Cure to clarify namespace use and disambig from common use of phrase. Still needs significant CU. Geogre + Moved back. Per Wikipedia:Naming conventions (precision)#Wikipedia:Naming conventions (last sentence), "The basic rule is that, unless you are absolutely sure that a related usage deserves or has an article, no disambigutation is necessary." This is established WP practice, even tho Wikipedia:Naming conventions#Be precise when necessary is less clear. Jerzy(t) + stub msg, WPify; correct names, add date; may need dab from 1923 Laurel (but not Hardy!) film; still a stubJerzy(t)

Sauvie Island wikify, context

Nashik wikify, context

Helbreath unwikified orphan

FAST TCP

Namsen river wikify + Wikified, de-orphaned, and cleaned up writing a bit. Enough here about "harling" to spin off a whole other article. Joyous

Ned Sparks wikfiy + Wikified & expanded with his film roles. Geogre

Fox Family wikify + Wikified, but it needs dates of operation still. Geogre

Breathe (band) context, wikify

Crossroads of America Council - what IS it?

Arbitration - Long article should be divided into sections. Also has some unqualified statements about laws, which may vary from country to country.

June 22

C-3PO - Poorly written, some POV, not much about the character

I removed some of the POV and added some info and tried to clean it up a bit. This is my first major edit. Please let me know how I did! Paul 02:11, 9 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Francisco Valesio - Substub (one sentence), is he notable?

panic attack -- needs wikifying.

A Separate Peace + I cleaned up the spelling, but it really needs sentence structure and grammar help. I haven't read the book or I'd do it.

I haven't read it either, or I would, but this one is desperately bad (seems like a book report from a high school student). Geogre 18:48, 22 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Rex Lease Actor substub, but an old one. I put in the imdb link. Geogre 18:18, 22 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Ramstein Air Base Needs more wikifying

Settlers of Catan Massive article includes the entire rule book for the game, numerous illustrations from the board game, etc. Is this copyvio? Is it necessary? While we're at it, how about

Settlers of Catan, Seafarers expansion. That's the actual article title, and it's not so wikified nor notable. Anyone want to clean it or VfD it?

See Talk:Settlers of Catan/copyright and fair use. This article and its numerous spinoffs have had a long and contentious history which, IMO, is wrong. *I* believe that much of this material is a copyvio, but others disagree. RickK 18:45, Jun 22, 2004 (UTC)

Pranayama A very long, possibly promotional, POV piece about the glories of a type of Yoga.

Dave Batista - needs a lot of work

Arthur Avenue - needs much work

Aside from the ugliness of the entry, isn't it possible to VfD this on the rationale that other common street names have been deleted in the past. Arthur Ave isn't that notable, and there are many others by that name. (I won't VfD it if it's in CU process.) Geogre 17:25, 22 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Claro M. Recto - needs work

Wilderness first aid Needs either serious professional attention or serious deletions.

Half Caste - poem explanation needs expanding, poem itself should be cut to a small quote or moved to wikisource

Further, the poem is, by virtue of its date, entirely within copyright. The article author should offer up proof of permission, or this is absolutely a copyvio, unless we cut the whole poem (and we should, but not before finding out if there is permission). Geogre 12:59, 22 Jun 2004 (UTC)

June 21

Power beaming - Almost Unwikified.

+ some wikification, potential copyvio (towo)

Holland Smith - copied from a (public domain) US military website. Needs linking and possibly NPOVing. →Raul654 22:44, Jun 21, 2004 (UTC)

The Alternate Asphygmo-Pyramidal Syndrome - What is this? And what is that last sentence? Is it a copyvio? If kept, the "The" needs to come out of the title.

Structure of the draft EU Constitution: needs proper capitalization, and more expansion -- Kaihsu

Simple majority voting: misspellings, non-sequitur, possible POV -- Kaihsu

Dr. Teeth and the Electric Mayhem - Dosn't sound like a make beleive band, possibley cut and paste?

It's the band on "The Muppet Show." It should be an easy clean. Geogre 02:15, 22 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Not the Muppet Show, but The Muppet Movie. KeithTyler 06:26, Jun 22, 2004 (UTC)

They're in both, actually.

I think merging this with Dr. Teeth would be a good start. Joyous 03:37, Jul 1, 2004 (UTC)

Alphabet of human thought - looks like a cut and paste job. -Seth Mahoney

List of Persian given names see List of Hebrew names for what this should be.

Church rank needs formatting, information on other religions

Morios - format, shouldn't this page entitled either 'Moriae' or 'Moria'?

Lakeside School I don't trust myself with VfD these days, but this needs a move and clean. If one goes to Peterson's Guide to secondary education in the US and Canada, one will find a hearty 20-30 private schools named Lakeside. Further, one would find any number (inestimable) of public schools by the name. Having this be the one, the only, and for it to replicate, essentially, a Peterson's entry, just seems wrong to me. Geogre

HP-10B Wikify. Dunc_Harris

"Fuck Off" - by anon user. Need to verify due to potentially attractive content for trolls? Dunc_Harris|☺ 13:14, 21 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Verified, but the source I found was in French. Perhaps it would be better if there were a "Chinese Avant-Garde" or "Chinese Avant Garde" article & this info were folded into it in the absence of a fuller article on this exhibit. Geogre

I tried to clarify this, but could not find much info, apparently the Chinese title was 'The Uncooperative Attitude' why not re-title it that, with a mention of 'Fuck Off' in the article . User:Conte Giacomo

Call originator - Currently little more than a dicfef.

North Park, Chicago wrong style

From a tourist/real estate brochure? Pretty queersome. Full POV and boosterism. Any Chicago folks who can neuter this? Geogre

Reactive attachment disorder - needs work. Do we need all of those footnotes?

Trickle-down theory - NPOV supadawg

Karl Lieberherr - have wikified and tidied the spelling, but it needs someone who knows computer programming to take a look. -- Graham ☺

Lea Bridge currently only the location, can anything else be added?

E-Work - marketing-speak -- Khym Chanur

Balancing selection - wikification and plain english required +wikification, clarity copyedits done, should be removed from cleanup Lexor

Hylden wikification required -- Graham ☺

Potatoes on the Half-Shell - wikify, make less recipe-like

More than a month old

June 19-20

Paul Collyer merge into Championship Manager? Dunc_Harris

The Battle of The Champions Loads of folks have tinkered with it, but the POV is thick, and it sounds like it was ripped from a sports page (literally)

Junemba needs work from someone who knows Dragon Ball Z. [anonymous]

- May need to be moved to the respective 'characters' list. Poccil

Tulivu-Donna Cumberbatch - needs some formatting, NPOVing.

Oklahoma City Cavalry - substub

Bezique, looks like a cut and paste job; copyvio? (Smerdis of Tlön)

Gakkou Kaidan quote from text: This article is based on only my memory of one volume of the series, so please excuse any mistakes I make.

Possible crisis in Western publishing wikify, more context

Geodesy for the layman - needs rewrite to sound encyclopedic

• nonononono it needs to be moved to Wikibooks, which was made for things like it. -- EmperorBMA

June 18

Robert Abbot unimproved since August 2002, I tried to have a go but the academic text was too much for me. -- Graham  :) | Talk + clarified somewhat, but information about his actual significance is still needed. Vardion

Difficult case. The people he's confused with are significant, and I could write about them, but this fellow just wrote books. It's also pretty confusing in the text: he persecuted non-conformists (Puritans), and he's a Puritan? 17th c. language of schism is pretty torturous, and these non-conformists might be Anabaptists, etc. In other words, I'm not sure it can be cleaned more, but the subject passes the significance test. Geogre 13:39, 19 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Kachikoshi - this may be terminally a dicdef: a winning record in some unspecified type of competition. If someone has a clue, there might be article potential here, or replacement with a redirect. -- Jmabel 22:11, Jun 18, 2004 (UTC) + contextualised (sumo wrestling), but I don't know if it can ever be more than a dicdef - it basically just means "winning more matches than you lose". Vardion I added a bit about the significance of getting kachikoshi but think that there should at least be a link to here from (sumo wrestling). Perhaps the prizes are more important than kachikoshi? --Sekizaru 21:59, 23 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Pierre Audette - substub.

Noémi Lopinto - substub.

Katie Ka-Boom is an amusing, but not yet very encyclopedic, article on a character who apparently appears in several animations. -- Jmabel 21:26, Jun 18, 2004 (UTC)

JCreator - reads like an ad. -- Jmabel

I removed the advertising copy and the POV. What's left ain't a lot. If there are Java programmers who want to say explanatory words about this program, it can be cleaned more. Otherwise, it's a substub once it's no longer spam. Geogre

Warden's Five Rings - orphan, jargon

Water Boarding - a type of torture -orphaned

Wetlook - getting wet whilst wearing clothes....

Will to Power - a selection of quotes from Nietzsche

I cleaned it, but I feel pretty sure that our text dumper was dropping copyrighted material on us. Nietzsche's in the public domain, but translations are not so open. Can anyone verify that this translation is PD? Geogre 13:28, 19 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Kaufmann is not public domain. His translations (c 1960s or so) bear royalties and cost more than PD editions. I think this article still looks like cut-and-paste, and that it's at least stretching fair use because the quoted text constitutes more than half of it. CHL

Béjart Ballet - substub since February 2004: single line, single link.

White perch - the article is about how to catch white perch in NYC. POV, mess, not at all about the fish, completely unlike other fish pages.

Jack Irons - celebrity substub (think how poor the world would be without this entry!)

Cracovia vodka - substub. Need to ascertain whether encyclopedic. Dunc_Harris

Pop rap - Subsubstub, poorly written.

[[Communes_of_the_Calvados_d%E9partement]] - many articles need the empty sections commented out, and the stub message added

Bedford-Stuyvesant - Possible copyvio, unwikified.

Superficial anatomy - "from an old encyclopedia", in need of wikifying since November, 2002

Eek! This is not only obsolete and cumbersome (who searches for "superficial anatomy?"), but it's from an "old encyclopedia" that dates from the era of racial types. CU seems a waste, unless medical schools are still teaching a class called "Superficial Anatomy" and a MD wants to fill in this article with a description of such a course of study. Geogre

Kunststiftung_NRW - substub, mess.

Probably VfD, since all Google links are in German. It seems to be a museum in Austria. The German Wikipedians could fill it out, but if the English Wikipedia users need this article, they need more context than a non-German speaker can provide. Geogre

Shithead (game) - needs wikification -- merge with Needs major CU or VfD as trivia. (I play a game called "Richard Nixon": do I get to make an article by that title?) Geogre

June 17

Hypertrophy dict. def.

Medicinal psychology - One big unwikified headache.

Wik'ed it up a tad. 10101001011

Aquatics at the 1924 Summer Olympics - is there any pattern for Olympics pages? This one seems scanty. Candidate for redirection?

Phosphodiesterase inhibitor, Phosphodiesterase - quite a bit of revision/expansion/correction is in order

Alexandrov topology - please edit this so a numbskull like me can actually understand it... -- Graham  :)

Visual short term memory I have justed added my first article. I would be grateful if people could read through it, wikify it, shorten it etc. There is a pre-existing article on short-term memory, but this is a somewhat different topic and my feeling was that it was better keep two separate pages, but if anyone wants to try merging the two that would be great.

Management by Jugaad Huh? The writing completely obscures whatever it is that this is about. Any Indians want to clarify or nominate for deletion, if not?

June 15-16

Layer 4 router - context, expand

Wolfsheim's Discography format, context, unwikified

Famous political quotations Wikify, at least. Wikibooks for things like this? I love commonplace books, but this gets into Bartlett's territory, doesn't it? Geogre 13:19, 16 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Festa Needs other "festae," as it's also a Latin word, and this article bleeds into 'fete' and 'feast days,' doesn't it? 206.205.115.3

International Risk Governance Council wikify

Balan K. Nair - Substub

Alexius Petrovich - awful bunch of text

Peter I of Russia, Paul of Russia, Alexander III of Russia, Nicholas I of Russia. - sections like in Nicholas II of Russia and Alexander I of Russia not just bunch of text

Media controversy POV & limited to videogames

CineMagic (film festival): Substub, just a pointer to a website. Geogre

Paper chromatography of amino acids: I'm really unsure about this. Is it a paste from a lab manual? Is anyone going to go to an encyclopedia & fill in all that in the search box? Is it a how-to and therefore subject to VFD? Can it be cleaned up by a bio-specialist filling in what paper chromatography has done for the world? Geogre 13:50, 15 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Bruce Dinwiddy needs formatting. Possible copyvio. Academic Challenger

Alkaline battery - Hoo-wee! Bordering on nonsense. - Lucky 6.9

Al Gore's views - Needs copyed for tense

June 13-14

51forth Doesn't look like it should have it's own article, or should be expanded. Without further information about why this variant is special, it looks like it should just be a part of the main Forth article Andy_Christ -leave for now; maybe it will be expanded, maybe not DJ Clayworth

Tolerance has been edited by various folks, but still has an uncomfortably polemic feel.

Subliminal message is very pro a subject that almost everyone believes to be tin-foil hattery.

Stanislav Petrov lessen PoV

Guttenburg - move to a ship's name Guttenburg?

Lord Basava - Wikify, language cleanup

Also need to check facts. Is this the same person? I cannot find information about anyone else, but the website contradicts the date and place of birth. --Caliper

Luigi Denza - a stub about what appears to be a 19th century musician, but which seems rather incoherent in its current form. Bryan

Liberal Elite, elite media -stubby, POV. -Sean Curtin

Sabians - non-standard layout, non-encyclopaedic tone, no internal links, talk page stuff dumped in the main article, and an edit war, oh my!

The Jungle Book (1994 film), Tim Reid, Tracey Ross, Circle of Friends, The Mask of Zorro, Capitol (television), The Jungle Book 2 Always, Jonathan Goldstein, The Newton Boys, Walter Nichols, Jonathan Goldstein. More sub-substubs. - Lucky 6.9

Muhammad Thakurufar Al-Azam needs fact checking.

King Zhuangxiang of Qin - NPOV, wikify Muriel

Charles Coughlin probably de-PoV & remove source material to WikiSource

Julio Dam could use quick readthrough by someone with biblical knowledge. --Caliper

Alive (story) style, facts

Samkhya cosmology - doesn't explain the term, depends on an external link to do most of the work

June 10-12

White Base needs attention from a Mobile Suit Gundam fan. As do the rest of that user's contributions. Please?

Islamic views of homosexuality - questionable material about same-sex marriage

Technology acceptance model mostly unwikified, orphan, copyvio?

Shimazu sub-stub

Nice guy syndrome - survived VfD but needs serious revision--NPOV, research or other evidence to substantiate claims. -The related Attraction pathology also needs serious NPOVing.

Sayeret Matkal - seems to stray somewhat from NPOV. I Also, much of it seems to be a copyvio from http://www.specwarnet.com/world/matkal.htm - some of which has been substantially edited, but much hasn't. - MykReeve

Arsinoe IV - Horribly garbled writing, not even consistent on the spelling of the person it is about. -- Jmabel

Port Adelaide Enfield - about a place in Australia, looks promotional as it stands. -- Jmabel

Express - poorly written stub about a clothing company. -- Jmabel

Shape dissection - written like textbook, not encyclopedia article. If it's a copyvio, it's not of anything Google finds, so probably just clean it up. -- Jmabel

Eiko Kadono, Second paragraph of this stub is almost incomprehensible (author of paragraph writes: "She published Kiki in 1985. She's a very kind and generous person.", but then goes to explain the mother's kindness and generosity.). Somebody who knows the story needs to clarify exactly who the kind and generous one is, and give an appropriate example. See also Talk:Eiko Kadono.

William Campbell is credibility-challenged.

Control theory equation example 1 Certainly a useless title; I suspect this should be integrated into Control theory, the only article that references it. -- Jmabel

Guardo - Medium-length article apparently put through a translation program. In a few places the translation makes no sense. SWAdair | Talk

June 7-9

Civil Rights Act of 1957 - at best, an unwikified mess that begins in mid-thought. At worst, a copyvio

The Heatskores - Copyvio? At best, an unwikified, POV screed.

Quality engineering - cut and paste from external site. Needs work. - From [3], could require a complete rewrite, probably better to start from scratch. - porge

?? better to split-&-merge with Quality assurance & Quality control ?? -- PFHLai 05:19, 2004 Jul 14 (UTC)

Broadway Is My Beat just a stub but needs wikification (and content rephrasing?)

Departmentalization, cleaned up text a bit, but still needs some work - porge

Enjoy Incubus Just a track listing in HTML (non-wiki) format. sub-stub as it wasn't a particularly history-changing album. --Long, Tall Texan

Levantine Arabic - sub-stub

Polynesian mythology - little description, mostly a jumbled unnavigable list.

Meenas - Good content, poor English - needs puntuation, spelling and grammer tidied up and wikification.

Wolf Szmuness - wikify, probably some misc attention needed

June 3-6

Directive - disambiguation, stub or VfD? See Talk:Directive --Hdk 14:14, 6 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Contributions by User:64.252.89.86 - see special:contributions/64.252.89.86, special:contributions/69.37.75.93

Owlman - seems not to be patent nonsense [4], but needs further investigation, as in further research I mean. Dunc_Harris|☺

Oropharyngeal lesion - wikify, possible copyvio

Ponerinae - see talk page

How to Heal Traumas -- Probaby just needs some TLC, emphasizing from the beginning that the articles concerns psychological (not physical) traumas, moving further from the base copyrighted text (see article history), etc. SWAdair

Convalescence - dicdef at present, but might be expandable.

Nancy Sullivan - a totally vacuous sub-stub

LIN Television - content does not match title, also wikify, gram, fact-check

Lisa Crystal Carver, Cindy Dall, Costes, - all POV by same author

Johann Philipp von Stadion wikfy expand

George Kalafatis needs some more context

FNN DATE LINE I cleaned up everything I could actually understand, but it was poorly translated from the Japanese article and some of it is incomprehensible. Probably needs someone who can either read & understand the Japanese or research independently. -- Jmabel 09:07, 3 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Paper Computer Game wikify, fact check

Nix 5-6 wikify, add more info

Nezahualcóyotl unwikified, sub-stub, context

Sangli wikify, remove POV, verify accuracy

May 31 - June 2

Portuguese personal pronouns - context and formatting

Sailor Art Thomas - substub

Ikkakumon - wikify, align with other digimon articles

South Azerbaijan unwikified, POV

Ethics of technology not an article

The Farewell Sermon. Check copyright; I guess the translation could be copyrighted. Write introduction. Thue

• Source text - replaced with a stub and link to wikisource. Still needs a better introduction. --Robert Merkel 02:24, 18 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Center for the Advancement of Genomics ad

Vivisection A complete mess needs some NPOVing and some ordering

Gramophone Awards unformatted, no intro

Battle of Vysehrad needs major copyediting, wikify

Spring Creek, Oklahoma - Major copyedits, wikis and additional facts needed - Lucky 6.9

Integrate Departments of Bolivia with the departments added here [5].

CEMAC Looks like an ad. Rewrite or list on vfd.

Permanent press sub-stub, poss dict def

Muzafer Sherif format, fact verify

Atelier sub-stub

Code 128 poss copy vio, format and explain more clearly

Battle of Khadesh and Battle of Kadesh (Redirected from Battle of Qadesh) - the accounts seem similar. Same battle. Merge.

E paul du pont - substub

Funchain ad for a website? GreatWhiteNortherner

I vote it gets moved to VfD. Long, Tall Texan 19:45, Jun 9, 2004 (UTC)

Water jet rapids in need of help. Tom-

May 29-30

Offal - dict. def.

List of Presidents of Madrid put the entire listing in table format, the rest of the article badly needs wikification. All links lead to non-existent pages Jam2k

Fireball Zone needs context. Who is the band or artist?

Roquepertuse wikify, format

Tourism in Egypt wikify, format

Avant garde metal unwikified needs complete rewrite

John C. Stennis Space Center - IRC channel sez: <DopefishJustin> looks too poorly written to be copyvio

• Attempted to wikify, added another photo. How's it look now? --Ardonik 01:51, Jul 17, 2004 (UTC)

May 26-28

Anon user 69.37.176.35 insists on posting sub-stubs regarding TV shows, B-movies and their actors. Content is obviously valid, but how does one show this individual how to do it right? - Lucky 6.9. IPs used:

• 64.252.53.43
• 69.37.176.35
• 64.252.172.185
• 69.37.40.95
• 64.252.165.90

George Gabashvili - wikification

• improved the page a bit, but not I still think it needs more work MvD 11:33, June 11, 2004

Duca de Northumbria - unwikified, poss copy vio

Carver Mead is a sub-stub about the founder of Foveon Electronics in Santa Clara. - Lucky 6.9

Psychology of torture - overwrought hysterical tone needs desensationalizing -- Rewrote a few grafs, but there's lots more to tackle. KeithTyler

Columbia College of Columbia University wikification

• Has now seen a fair bit of work and cleanup notice has been removed EddEdmondson 18:06, 12 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Moe Smith - sub-stub

Da Band - needs info, copyediting, wikification. (aka, needs a lot of help.)

Urogenital opening sub-stub, need medical professional

Project Censored reads like a press release

Caraga, Davao Oriental personal account

Guadalupe Caracara - unformatted, incoherent. Fuzheado

Megan Marshak - totally unwikified, not a copy vio

List of murdered porn stars - unwikified, inaccurate (L.F.)?=

• Now fully wikified and with more information. However, the accuracy (from the one source) is still questionable. Cluster 08:47, 21 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Koos de la Rey - wikify. Very POV, perhaps need total rewrite.

Jubilo Iwata - bad english.

Shivneri fort - needs some explanations

Saitwal - some translation?

Elitesecurity fmt, famous?

May 23-25

Maxim Kammerer - wikify

Rollout photography - unformatted, unwikified

Suikazura - unwikified substubs.

Kedarnath, Badrinath - Wikify, merge with other articles?

Telegraph code only info on chinese telegraph

Untitled Brain/Buckethead/Bernie Worrell Collaboration - retitle? wikify +moved +copyvio Secretlondon

Pawel Delag - stub, wikify, english, general lookover +did some copyediting/wikifying/NPOVing Lexor|Talk

Political history and modern state of the inhabitants of the Alps - Really needs help.

Mutor - substub, encyclopedic? Andrewa

Francisco I. Madero - parts of it very poorly written, needs editing

did some copyediting and style cleanup, but there are still problems; I'm not sure whether these are from POV or accuracy. Anybody know the topic? Lisa Paul

David Weiss HaLivni - format

Post-war Germany vs post-war Japan - rename, rewrite, and if all else fails, vfd

Biodanza - some context?

ModPlug Tracker slightly POV

May 21-22

Otto Maria Carpeaux - needs extensive NPOVing and wikification

Maldivian Democratic Party - needs NPOV editing

Igigi, Nanium, Imi, Elulu, Shu-turul - sub-stubs.

Xu Chu - seems to possibly be a mix of fact and fiction Guanaco

Poul Schlüter not sentences

• Also, needs someone who knows about him to work on it. There's not enough clear info. Astarael

Looking at United States Naval reactor rthere are some discrepancies between the vessels listed under each reactor type and the reactors namd in the articles describing the individual reactors and vessels (e.g. S3G reactor, USS Will Rogers (SSBN-659), USS Gato (SSN-615) and USS Triton (SSN-586). This will have to be sorted out by somebody with accurate knowledge! ki

Leftovers

See Wikipedia:Cleanup/Leftovers