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May 10
Abdul Rasul Sayyaf - very POV
Quantity dic definition
Democratic egalitarianism dic definition
Colchicine - something wrong with the picture, it overlaps with text.
- Moved picture up for better visibility, didn't see overlap, might be your computer system playing up. Also rewrote article, with new subheadings - MGM 08:10, May 10, 2004 (UTC)
John Herbert Chapman - exceedingly POV RickK 02:05, 10 May 2004 (UTC)
Red-baiting dic defintion
May 9
Alcazarquivir, Battle of Alcazarquivir both look like typed in from a book, although noo google match for e-copy. Mikkalai 21:03, 9 May 2004 (UTC)
Gallery Black Swan - could use some more information (and perhaps a pic)
Asha Bhosle - just got a lengthy addition of highly-POV and poorly-written text.
Computer software - Weird layout, especially the introduction
Dhanraj Pillay Very little information. Needs to be rewritten by someone who really knows about field hockey Jam2k
Víctor Raúl Haya de la Torre Why is poet significant? (political? gay?) NPoV.
RA-90 unformatted +formatted, but more informations needed (imho) Sid
Howard Bloom reads like an ad
Brazilian Tapir very short, is it correct?
May 8
Ulf Bergström unformatted, not sentences -- did some cleanup, moved to a cap'ed name. But is he notable?
Shamian Island unformatted, needs more content +some links added Sid 14:00, 9 May 2004 (UTC)
Tony Tony Chopper unformatted, lacks context, is he significant?
Cloverleaf interchange - unclear, unwikified
Video game industry practices needs NPOV
Hedwig Elisabeth Amelia de Baviere Pfalz-Neuburg needs to be fixed/rewritten - cleaned a bit, there may be other daughters
Catholic Concept of the Divine needs good editing, wikification, maybe a dash of NPOV. +formatted Sid 17:24, 8 May 2004 (UTC)
Punjabi cuisine currently 2 recipes instead of a general article
Pharaoh gives different years than articles on individual Pharaohs (e.g. Amenhotep I or Thutmose I of Egypt). There are disputes about Egyptian chronology but could we try to be consistent between different articles?
Mehdi Mahdavikia needs more links, content, less newspaper crap language +added some links, but I don't know the man Sid 14:00, 9 May 2004 (UTC)
May 7
Clontarf - wikify, NPOV, add original Clontarf (Ireland) and any others. +Some work done, might benefit from more NPOV.
Charles Radclyffe - needs context
Farnsworth Paradox - all google hits that I get are about Futurama. Does the paradox only exist on the TV show? Or is it also related to Philo Farnsworth who is a real person?
- I'd expect this site to provide a "cultural reference" (foot of page) if there was a real world Farnsworth paradox, and on this basis, think it safe to say it is a Futurama invention. --Tagishsimon
- As far as I can tell it relates only to an episode of "Futurama". I modified the article to reflect that. If it's important in the tv show it should be linked from there. Currently its and orphan other than the link here. Vfd candidate?-- Infrogmation 18:49, 8 May 2004 (UTC)
- As a Futurama fan, I'd consider this article a candidate for deletion. It isn't even spelled right - the episode title is "The Farnsworth Parabox" not -dox. And there is no specific mention of a "paradox" within the episode dialogue. dmmaus 07:42, 9 May 2004 (UTC)
Noachide Laws needs merged w Noahide Laws (noahide has more google hits)
Operation cwal unwikified
Wikipedia:Cleanup - needs editors willing to check whether articles listed on it are done, and remove them if so. Also, no articles that have gone two months without need for cleanup ending have been moved to leftovers in over a month.
Op-Ed very poor. - I have done some work, but it is still poor. I have wikified it, used more concise grammar and added the stub message. Needs more work by a journalist who knows about this sort of thing. David Thrale 09:31, 7 May 2004 (UTC)
Proto-Finno-Ugric text not related to title, substub
phrasing -- Covers phasing, not phrasing, should be merged with phasing -- Starx
May 6
Mary Ann Day Brown - article only contains genealogical information and doesn't say why she is individually famous. I left a message on the talk page asking for more info to be included in the article but none has as yet. -- Graham :) | Talk
Images of Mumbai - general cleanup, see Talk:Images of Mumbai for recent vfd debate
Frank Stelzer - Not really POV just badly phrased? Andrewa
- Moved to Stelzer engine, and POV is cleaned up. However, since this has very minimal Google power, someone may pull the plug with a VfD (couldn't resist the puns). Alcarillo
Soviet tank production during World War II - lacks insightful layout, should be renamed list in it's current form. - MGM 08:36, May 6, 2004 (UTC)
National Chi Nan University - proper formatting; grammar Alcarillo
Catholic Church in Taiwan - proper formatting; grammar; stub (could use dates of founding, some history, maybe noted members of the church, etc.) Alcarillo Ren
May 5
Text Summaries formatting and content. I have done quite a lot to improve this. David Thrale 22:49, 6 May 2004 (UTC)
Statism- The article as written seems to need work on NPOV. Sounds like an entry from the Encyclopedia of Libertarianism. Gwimpey 22:30, 5 May 2004 (UTC)
An anon is making quite a mess by writing the discography of the band Wolfsheim into a heirarchical series of articles.
- This is not the place to put this. It's better to inform an admin about it. - MGM 22:26, May 5, 2004 (UTC)
- I cleaned this up, but didn't want to mess with the mess of a discography. Article still needs more info like dates. I put a stub msg on it.Alcarillo
Corpo Truppe Volontari and Second Mithridatic War - submitted by different anons, both need formatting work. Might want to do a quick google copyright check, too. - Second Mithridatic War not a copyvio (at least not through Google), and is now wikified. Adam Bishop
Frederick Lowy - delete immediately; link to an offensive cartoon; may be a Canadian health researcher according to Google, but who knows if it's this guy? - Gwimpey 20:39, 5 May 2004 (UTC) - Checked, this is the guy, rector at Concordia University; stub or delete? Gwimpey 20:45, 5 May 2004 (UTC) + vfd, doesn't look important. Isomorphic
Panchavati and Tanaji Malusare need context and formatting
Screenplay - unformatted, and fails to provide information that's not general knowledge to most people. Would benefit from expansion by editor who's in the biz. (head over to my talk page to leave comments on what you'd like to see included)- MGM 12:59, May 5, 2004 (UTC)
Diving disorders could be turned into an interesting article, but it only lists stuff without much explanation of the physics behind them at the moment. I'd would like to see this expanded by someone knowledgeable on diving and I would like it redirected to Diving disorder (without the 's') so it complies with WP naming conventions. (Comments on my talk page, please)- MGM 11:48, May 5, 2004 (UTC)
- Moved to diving disorder; still needs cleanup. -Sean 04:20, 6 May 2004 (UTC)
History of translation technology - 2 links to copyvios and a whole bunch of red links. Could be an interesting article when complete.
Egg tempera needs help
Bonnot gang cop ed for ESL; perhaps a little structure (dramatis personae?)
Carlsbad Decrees needs more content
May 4
Cheat-sheet (Sheepshead) does not seem encyclopedic. Rewrite or redirect?
Chromophil substance - needs context and copyedit
Lockergnome forums needs to be rewritten or deleted (was on vfd)
Pirate radio and Pirate Radio want merging; also fact check --- was Francois Mitterrand ever arrested for running a pirate radio station? (Smerdis of Tlön)
Ceramics - needs an opening paragraph and distinction from Pottery (nothing to do with boy wizards, though)- MGM 12:15, May 4, 2004 (UTC)
Copy info from List of books by award or notoriety into List of prizes, medals, and awards and vice versa, create some link between these lists to prevent redundancy
Leonardo leonardo about a character from a little-known tv show. Needs formatting work.
- + fixed some, still awkward
A minor character on a show that only ran for two episodes. This should be moved to VfD.
Mystic Records could use a sentence
José Batlle y Ordoñez unformatted
Wikified, but still NPOV issues ("sacred and holy catholic week"). Needs review by someone familiar with the material. Jmclean 19:10, 4 May 2004 (UTC)
Historia Britonum - cut down excessive quotes?
Vinnish is this accurate?
IXC unformatted
David Heath (wrestler) unformatted
Tellinger unformatted
Football in Brazil unformatted
2001 Conservative leadership election - mainly dealt with at Conservative Party (UK); only linked to from Ann Widdecombe who wasn't even a candidate!
May 3
Age of Unreason Trilogy. I'm not sure the title makes sense. There appear to be 4 books [1], so it's not a trilogy.
Kent_Labour_Students Needs wikification. If indeed there is any scope for this article at all.
Dik hon is this made up?
- My friend (who can speak cantonese) claims that word-for-word, it means "dripping sweat". I don't think the definition given in the above article is too far-fetched -Frazzydee 00:20, 5 May 2004 (UTC)
Blues Rock and Blues-rock need merging.
Rue Saint-Maur (Paris Metro) - extremely stubby, unless something can be told about this station, I'd like one big Paris Metro article with a map of the lines included. A list of stations isn't going to be helpful. - MGM 14:53, May 3, 2004 (UTC)
Garrett A. Morgan into which I have merged Garrett Morgan contained information that seems to have been apocryphal or just plain wrong. Aiming for NPOV, I have removed what seemed dubious, although other web pages include it. Please would somebody else have a look at this and correct if necessary? EdH 14:15, May 3, 2004 (UTC)
Blue Lagoon cocktail requires expansion from just a recipe
Will to Power requires wikification
James Blake - Somebody needs to make an article out of what is currently a wall poster Chancemill 14:39, May 3, 2004 (UTC)
More than a week old
The following items (down to the next full-section heading) are more than a week old, but not yet reviewed for completion in the fasion that itmes so labeled formerly were.
May 2
Vinnie Vincent - needs wikifying, possible fact-check, NPOV, etc. Similarly, Mark St. John, Bruce Kulick, although those look better. Possibly worth checking other KISS related entries too.
Lawrence J. DeLucas unformatted (UPDATE: I have done some formatting, but it needs more wikification -Frazzydee 20:53, 2 May 2004 (UTC))
- I did some more formatting and wikification, but it still needs some more -- aibyou_chan 19:45, 9 May 2004 (UTC)
Charles Curran - underwikified, needs better context, article notes is only about one of two notable people by that name, disambig?
Burnley Wood - poorly written
Padiham - copyrighted? + rewritten and added river detail
Merak Mail Server - advertisement, possibly not important enough to be kept
U.S. presidential primary - Includes text added on 7 March which itself includes references to California Plan, deleted today as per consensus on vfd. This needs rooting out while keeping the emphasis of the article intact.
Chinese nobility - needs to cover noble titles up to the Qing Dynasty
Blood Ruby looks ad-like, not encyclopedia-like
Cot-caught merger Factual dispute regarding how widespread this linguistic merger is; see article's Talk page; Believe this is fixed; AAR there's now an external link to a dialect map that shows the areas of the merger. Smerdis of Tlön
AMC AMX - needs work
Cohen v. California unformatted
White Sox-Cubs rivalry Needs NPOVing, wikification and copyediting. Nevertheless quite nice article.
May 1
California's Gold Describes someone as 'cherubic and fit'. NPOV.
Louis Crane unformatted
Landmark case - i did a partial, but still: inconsistent bold/italic/format/punct, redundant links, links with _ in them, /li tags, nearly completely mispelled, inconsistent capitals. Badanedwa 20:31, May 1, 2004 (UTC)
Ian McKenzie Anderson, Sandy Burnett - unwikified, noteworthy enough?
Masaaki Sakai bad english
Gaetano Badalamenti only DOB and DOD
Flightgear style, content +merged with FlightGear, moved much non-NPOV open source advocacy (not really relevant in this particular article anyway) to Talk. Lexor|Talk
New York Euphoria and Los Angeles Temptation, since there is no article on Lingerie Football League these don't mean much + wrote an article on the LFL. But the LA team is the Dream not the Temptation.
U.S. Marine Corps Force Reconnaissance - needs edit to a user-friendly article directed to the general public (has a lot of military terms).
Ezo - this article is a mess. Formosa is one of the islands of Japan?
- It was in 1911 (see source of article)
John Demjanjuk looks like story was unfinished, even before yesterday's news that his deportation is underway. --Jerzy(t)
John E. Blaha currently a resume, needs transforming into an article.
- A number of the astronaut articles contributed by User:Theon are unformatted data dumps
More than a week old; rev'ed once
Items in this (top-level) section were presumably reviewed for completion before at the time of being moved out of the "just in" section.
April 30
Shout fire in a crowded theatre - Tongue in cheek article by tired and possibly drunk author
Backa - contradicts itself (is it in Serbia or divided between Serbia and Hungary?)
- Contradictions now resolved, but needs more on Hungarian Bácska
Ethos Game Basic - needs context (what is it), wikify, possible POV issues, copyvio
Colon Hydrotherapy (Colonics) Clearly this article has got issues.
Amos Meller rewrite. Makes little sense. All google hits for "Amos Meller" are Wikipedia mirrors. Misspelled? Does not exist?
Amma makes no sense (Makes more sense now, but still despirately needs help --FrankB)
Story of the Year Needs rewrite so it makes sense. Is this an important band? I don't know anything about them. All the info on the page is vague. The band was formed 'somewhere' in the US and may have sold 'a 100 or a 200' records.
- + rewrote some. still some ambiguous info.
April 29
Oakworth Hall sounds like sales brochure
Futami Jouwa from vfd, no consensus, needs tidying up
History of Somalia slightly POV, mostly tongue-in-cheek
Myrmica rubra an article we need but this is a substub, needs everything seglea
Agent 212 substub
Daryl F. Mallett - fan article about some SciFi editor. Needs massive trimming and rewrite, removing of excessive linking, trimming bibliography, fact check (I couldn't verify the film credits). Maybe even a copyvio? But from where? Lupo
Fear Factory seems rather POV. Terms like 'hugely successful' etc.
William Melton little more than externals links, this isn't dmoz
James H. Webb looks like autobiography, needs wikifying. +copyvio
April 28
Feijoada completa recipe, style, to wikibooks?
Linus Kendall, unwikified, sub-stub, famous?
Barbus - Ram-Man has set up a batch of excellent articles on fishes in this genus, but the material is mainly aquarium oriented and someone with a bit of technical background needs to rake through FishBase and add more ichthyological material. I'd do it myself but I am still bogged down in IDing possible additions to the List of San Francisco Bay Area wildflowers. seglea
Agricultural Revolution This focuses only on the historic process in Scotland. This is a major historic topic involving developments in agricultural methods and machines across Europe and North America Lumos3 16:20, 28 Apr 2004 (UTC)
Spiritual socialism POV, context
Bear Son Tale huh? context, relevance, etc.
Boris V. Morukov has been wikified, needs to be structured
Ernesto Laclau needs general cleanup, preferably by someone who knows who he is.
April 26-27
Fallout - mess created by merging two articles. The beginning is reasonable, after that, a scrambled file of facts. Some content would be happier at radioactive contamination.
Asana - needs some NPOV and cleanup from someone who knows about this.
Community inquiry labs - needs context
Guthlac - somebody's homework: an essay containing first person singular and plural. Needs major cleanup by someone familiar with Old English poetry. Lupo
Donny Hamzik - related to Manowar; stub; needs context.
Prophet Onias - very definitely POV, needs fact checking. - Mustafaa Completely rewritten by anon, might need another check.
Berenger Sauniere - needs fact-checking and possibly NPOV. Google search suggests that he's controversial and/or surrounded by some conspiracy theories and legends.
Vito Genovese - one big paragraph, sentences beginning with prepositions, run on sentences etc. Could do with edits for style and clarity.
+ Did full edit (since when are mafioso mafiosi stars?), but still feels it needs to be expanded. External links with information are included. - MGM
Buck or Two - needs edit for style from someone who knows this chain of stores + fixed style a bit, could still use more info Adam Bishop
More than two weeks old
The items in this (top-level section) were presumably reviewed for completion both when moved from "Just in" but were not again reviewed when moved to "More than two weeks old"
April 24-25
Pyrroloquinoline quinone - legitimate? Claims of "new vitamins" are always suspicious. - It's purportedly a vitamin in mice. No deficiency disease has been shown in humans, so it's certainly not a human vitamin.
Ernest Mason Satow - a mess.
continuity, continuity error -- could probably be merged.
Srila Vishnupada, H.D.G. Ramakrishnananda Swami - puff piece, profoundly POV.
Property damage - VfD voted to keep and list on cleanup, see Talk:Property damage. -- Graham :) | Talk
University of Kentucky - horrible, dreadful mess after last anon edit. -was reverted. --- Still needs a lot of help. Apparently nothing of consequence is taught there (I thought as much), so sports are its only focus. -- Smerdis of Tlön
Authorial intentionality - Dead end, non encyclopedic, non wiki, POV. I'd VFD except it might be a real thing.
- I'd say VFD. It suffers from all of the above and any relevant points it makes could be addressed within Author or Intentional fallacy --bookgirl
- I does seem to be a real thing, we just need an English major to sort it out. - SimonP 01:31, May 1, 2004 (UTC)
Early flying machines - unusual style
April 21-23
Tom Wisniewski, Yuri Ruley - just bulleted lists
Mobb Deep -needs expanding
Devil's beatin' his wife can anything more be said about this? origns would be nice but still a dictdef. vfd
Toaster museum author doesn't seem to know anything about it
Royal Lao Air Force - poor, one line stub.
Management Creativity - orphan, dicdef, unwikified
Bioacoustics - needs to be expanded, just a dicdef now.
RFA_Salviola (A502) needs table filled in.
Phat short article in dictionary format, needs refactor
Salvage Pathway -needs expanding
Sin#Muslim views of sin - POV, hostile tone. I assume atonement from sin is possible in Islam, but am short of particulars. (Smerdis of Tlön) Yes, blame this one on User:RK. It still needs a lot of expansion, but I think I've cleaned up the bias at least. - Mustafaa 05:49, 2 May 2004 (UTC)
Roberto Tirado - from vfd, consensus to keep but requires cleanup. See Talk:Roberto Tirado -- Graham :) | Talk
More than two weeks old; rev'd twice
The items in this (top-level section) were presumably reviewed for completion both when moved from "Just in" and again when moved from "More than a week old"
April 19-20
Gregory Lauder-Frost unwikfied, needs some loving attention from a neutral Irish Wikipedian. + toned down (self?-)promotional tone, but probably needs yet more NPOV
IO-APIC - incomprehensible to a layman, lacks links
Agent Cody Banks - outdated information, info on sequel needed. - MGM 07:43, Apr 20, 2004 (UTC)
RJ Sternberg - sub-stub, famous?
1999: Hore, Mitakotoka! Seikimatsu Apparantly a japanese monopoly game, anyone ever heard of it? +Google indicates it's a Nintendo game [2] which has nothing do with the description in the article. vfd?
Engagement ring needs to be combined with Wedding band with a new article title. TimothyPilgrim
- Better, move the "Engagement ring" section from the latter to the former. The latter page needs a lot of work; see Talk:Wedding band. Gdr
Velocette unwikified, in timeline format
April 18
E-Consensus. Is this just original research or is it a real thing worth an article? Maybe VfD? - "Actually it's an overlap of electronic forums and consensus decision making. partly origional research in Information Theory regarding the mathamatical nature of consensus in open issue fourms. It also offeres others core ideas in electronic decision systems. I would hope for a Vote for Inclusion VFI.
Blue Tears - Alice Cooper fans take note and give this some help, format, sub-stub.
Concupiscence - Extant request from 2002 for theologically trained Catholic & Protestant to review this article.
Tim Eyman unformatted + Some cleanup done, needs more work. Jonel
Marine aquarium fish species - Subedit, tone of voice
Remote concentrator - Some sort of telephone exchange multiplexor?
Magnification - poor stub.
Soundhog - needs a lot of work.
April 17
Bread and Roses - not sure if it's a copyvio, but it is POV. Rick
Patient empowerment -- unresolved factual dispute
ARY Group grammar, POV
Culture of Saudi Arabia - messy, incomplete
Cyprus Mines Corporation - not written like a encyclopedia article
Abstract music - what does the last paragraph mean??
Wenura Dissanayake - just a list of stats, last sentence bizarre. No google hits, does he exist?
April 14-16
Scenario planning - interesting but unsure about reliability of "A step-by-step guide to scenario planning" (contained in article)
Venedes - uh? Can anyone make sense of this? About Wends, no? Good idea to merge and save anything useable about the historic names for them.
SMDS - incomprehensible sub stub.
Afghan Turkestan - very dated 1911. + I've wikified it a bit more and changed a few words ('E.' to 'east' and 'sq. m.' to 'square metres') but I don't know enough about the place to significantly update anything. BillyH
Laurence Janifer, unwikified
Ronia the Robber's Daughter reads like it was machine translated from Swedish. - Fixed. Mustafaa 06:08, 2 May 2004 (UTC)
Max and Moritz should be on wikisource, no?
Mnemonic link system - needs major rework, doesn't give definition, mainly list of links currently.
Liberalism and conservatism in Latin America - needs context/merging, unwikified
Tomb of Shah Jamal - unwikified sub-stub
Precising definition - lacks precision, definition and much else Charles Matthews
G protein - unwikified and the name of the contributor. Suggest merging with G protein-coupled receptor. JFW | T@lk 20:28, 14 Apr 2004 (UTC)
April 13
K. M. Peyton unresolved comment in article.
QR algorithm - seems to be a topic, but needs better context and info.
Sonata da chiesa - no context, unwikified
The Garden of Cyrus - PoV (& copyvio?): Not copyvio; see talk page. (Smerdis of Tlön)
64-bit needs updating/merging
Iraqi National Accord Iraqi anti-Saddam group, article has not been updated since 2002
Abbotsford Saints - Regina Storm - Kamloops Critters - Nanaimo Navigators - Red Deer Outlaws - Lethbridge Dust Devils - All are said to be a part of the Canadian Baseball League, but that league no longer exists.
Sanctification - messy, unwikfied only from a Christian POV
April 10-12
Johannes Brahms early life all wrong; needs better external source.
Synod of Bishops sub stub
Cometbus, unwikified, POV
Dragon Ball Z Live Action Movie needs wikif. and definition early in article. Data needs to be rearranged.
Iraqi Revolution Command Council - very little information - needs expansion, wikification
Kanuri - substub
List of postal codes in Poland — All the Polish characters are broken; might need introductory paragraph; should probably all be wikified
Eye_surgery - format, slight copyvio potential, wikify
List of radio stations in Serbia and Montenegro moved from VfD, organize, copyedit, expand
Boiler Efficiency: taken straight from technical paper (possible copyvio?) - Vardion
Caliculation Routines: same as above - Vardion
Neofeudalism accuracy, NPOV, etc
April 6-9
Walo is it Walo or Wala?, wikify, expand
Casablanca class escort carrier - Majority of carriers on this list have empty information tables.
Kino no Tabi - needs some NPOV-ing, wikification
H. Irving Hancock unformated, unwikified
Morios - unwikified
Disambiguate the 2 dozens links at Prussian. --Menchi
More than a month old
The items in this (top-level) section were presumably reviewed twice for completion (when moved out of "just in" and out of "one week old"), but not when moved out of "two weeks old".
More than a month old; rev'd 3 times
April 4-5
Chanco - almost fine but states that he was born ca. 1624 and participiated in events that took place in 1622. One of those must be wrong.
The Fever - The Twilight Zone episode, needs making clear what it is at start. Also may need structure tweaking.
Incompetence - copyed, expand. Could be fun. Denni
April 1-3
THC Ministry - POV, famous?
Maîtresse Hounon'gon is another stub. Information? -- Slowking Man
Table setting, in need of rewrite. Non-encyclopedic language, unwikified
Security camera, unwikified, language
Patient- care, unwikified, language
Nurse assistant skills, only partially wikified
Preschool education has a rewrite, but needs more.
Wachovia Bank of Georgia - the building or the company?
Wikipedia talk:Make only links relevant to the context - conversation too long and convoluted, needs cleanup, but is rightfully POV --rs2
Particle_velocity_level - goes through the motions of describing a physics? term and its use w/o any clarity or understanding
Ito Noriko - sub-stub, famous?
March 26-31
Symbolics seems to repeat itself; also some overlap with Lisp machine.
Wilderness first aid Needs either serious professional attention or serious deletions.
Half Caste - poem explanation needs expanding, poem itself should be cut to a small quote or moved to wikisource
Lea Bridge and Lea Bridge road currently only the location, can anything else be added?
Michael Pennington - see talk page vfd
Rohan Gavaskar - lacking content, poor format, sub-stub
Cobra probe - obscure -- Khym Chanur
Quantum brain dynamics - long but hard to understand, pseudo-science
E-Work - marketing-speak -- Khym Chanur
March 23-25
Ambassadors (from Germany to Burkina Faso) 1 redlink does not a list make -- Graham :) | Talk
Vassula Ryden About a 'modern era prophet'. Very POV at the moment.
Sarah Gordon expand, wikify, format
- There are other problems as well. What do the words Sejm or szlachta or congnates of them mean to an English speaker? Cecropia 18:15, 4 Apr 2004 (UTC)
Publixtheatre Caravan - rather POV at present. Tualha
Toll-like receptor - need a lot more context, deadend, sub-stub
Via net loss - unwikified, more context
Geodesy for the layman - needs rewrite to sound encyclopedic
- nonononono it needs to be moved to Wikibooks, which was made for things like it. -- EmperorBMA / ブライアン 22:27, 10 Apr 2004 (UTC)
Eve Ellis style, overly gushing, unencyclopeic language
Stairway - needs wikification (particularly towards end), better sectioning and probably a good copyedit for measure. Zoney
March 21-22
Copyright Act of 1976 sub-stub, needs huge help from someone who knows anything about the act
[[Communes_of_the_Calvados_d%E9partement]] - many articles need the empty sections commented out, and the stub message added
Into the Unknown - sub stub, unwikified, formatting
Tintin and the Golden Fleece - sub-stub
Alexandrov topology - please edit this so a numbskull like me can actually understand it... -- Graham :) | Talk
EGBU-15 - just a table
March 17-20
Wong Wah-bo - sub stub, unwikified
Imperial College Electrical and Electronic Engineering Society - wikify and NPOV
Layer 4 router - context, expand
Afghanistan timeline 1901-1910 - too long paragraphs and probably unreadable as it is. Pfortuny
Al Gore's views - Needs copyed for tense
The annual customs - needs context, relation to Dahomey (merge?)
Software engineering demographicsNeeds to be wikified...but it looks like some of it might be copyrighted.
Midwest POV
Cao Cao Unification of the North - Wikify, context, (re)unification?, maybe better title
March 14-16
Messali Hadj - needs explanation of TLAs, unwikified
Richard Lyons - sub-stub
Reelin - unwikified, orphan, content questioned in article
Media coverage of the Israeli-Palestinian conflict - amateurish, merge elsewhere, VfD
Muhammad Thakurufar Al-Azam needs fact checking.
Orthomyxoviridae - wikify
King Zhuangxiang of Qin - NPOV, wikify Muriel
Jesuit High School - should be a disambiguation page; needs to address that there are multiple Jesuit High Schools, and what they are.
Islamic views of homosexuality - questionable material about same-sex marriage
March 12-13
Technology acceptance model mostly unwikified, orphan, copyvio?
Pain of Salvation - passes the Google test but needs complete rewrite.
Michael Anissimov - stub, info needs verification
Thomas S. Wootton High School unencyclopedic style. This high school is well-known in my area.
Computer numbering formats - very long article, lots un-wikified. Much info needs redistributed to constituent topics Binary numeral system, Integer (computer science), Floating point, ASCII, Binary coded decimal and Data type. Removed a request to merge with Integer (computer science). See Talk page. Zoney
MediaWiki:Cults - POV and inaccurate
Attribute - far more than just a telecommunications term
Nucleoid region - substub (one sentence) - needs expanding - if subject worth including Silverfish
March 2-11
Frank O'Connor currently in point form, don't know who he is enough to fix.
Dastar Corp. v. Twentieth Century Fox Film Corp. was on VfD; wikified, needs copyed to be reader friendly
42 BELOW: advert
Meditative art: needs grammar and format work, wikified
Joni Dourif pseudoscience, self-promotion
Hancock Place - needs NPOVing
Balancing network - needs in-depth description and a bit of non-engineers-only text.
Cabrini-Green - needs NPOVing
Corinth, Greece needs to be divided between into 2 articles: one about the city, the other about the prefecture
How to care for a pet cockatoo was listed on VfD consensus to keep byt needs TLC
More than two months old
February 20 - March 1
Intellectual property education Probably needs self promotion removed as does perhaps presumed autobio Shaheen Lakhan; Human memory process by same IP (noted at #February 4, 11th item), and those labelled "(Top)" at Contribs of (surely) the same person are also not yet edited by others, and may (or not!) still deserve scrutiny
Eliezer Ben-Yehuda - see talk page, not in standard format and POV
Aaron J. Fink, POV tract
February 25-29
Animation:Master - reads like an advert
Chairman of the National Defence Committee of North Korea - bogus crap, Kim Jong-il is not head of state
Fernando Lopes - needs formatting
Dahrumasan ga Koronda - needs wikifying
Bregenz - parts of it could benefit from list format
Tourism of Argentina - expand, context, wikify, npov
February 20-24
Southern All Stars - messy
Iain Cameron - substub; unwikified, famous?
February 16-19
Iraqi opposition - update? stub.
List of Croatians - Most linked pages need copyediting, as do the pages about Croation locations. Needs fact checking by non-anonymous Croatian w'pedians; much anon contrib. Check also for exactly duplicated entries with slightly different spelling or phrases in the title that shd be redirects. -×-IOHUser talk:IOH]]