User:Tzuchun
1. I see myself as an expert about Crescent Valley High school [1]because I went there all four yaers. Plus I lived only two miles away from the campus. Everthing about it was accurate except they did not have anything about the clubs that many of the students are a part of. Club activities were a major part of the school and student lives. Also, they need to reference a lot of the information they provided.
2. Corvallis the town in Oregon is another area where i see myself as an expert since I have lived there for 14 years. The article was very informative and even I learned some new information. The only thing I would change would be the part where they talk about schools. There is another school which they left out called Santiam Christian School from kindergarten to High school.
3. Scrubs [2] the TV show is my favorite to watch. I own all of the seasons except for the newest one. So this I believe makes me an expert in this area. The article on Scrubs was very thorough and covered everything very well. I might just add a few point about the characters' characteristics. a little more information on the synopsis or a deeper look at the characters.
4. I am an expert on cell phones [3] since I have had one since I was in 6th grade. I know the different brands that always come out and I know which brand names are more reliable or which ones you should use if you travel in and out of the country a lot. I also know a lot about other countries and the prices of those if a person wants to buy one. the article was very thorough. however, i would change the part where they talked about cell phones and culture, they should go into detail of how other countries use their phones than here in the US.
5. Sandboarding[4] is something I view myself as an expert on. I have been boarding for 3 years now. I go to Florence Oregon where the dunes are during the summer time and I like to go riding. the article was somewhat vague on the different equipment needed. they just talked about the boards but not how they will impact the rider and also they do not provide any information on where to go if one is looking for a place to hit the dunes.
I am choosing to edit the page about Crescent Valley High School and specifically the area about clubs and even more specifically girls rugby club at Crescent Valley. I would say that, the girls rugby club have had a couple coaches, first it was the OSU rugby girls themselves that came to help coach and then moved on to a single male coach. the girls practice where ever they are able to find a place, mostly at parks around Corvallis. the girls raise money by have bake sales on Crescent Valley campus and they are a part of the school clubs. There are about 15-20 girls on the team from both Crescent Valley High School and from Corvallis High School, this is a joint club. this is a website that talks about rugby and how to start a club if someone would like to. <http://www.rugbyoregon.org/girls.asp/>
I would also like to post a photo about a Corvallis girl tackling a girl from Eugene. the girl from Corvallis is behind, you notice her by her orange and black socks. <http://www.oregonsportsphotos.com/images/spring07/CRC_ERC_DSC3272a.jpg>
