Steve McIntosh: Revision history

4 October 2024

• curprev 03:2203:22, 4 October 2024 ShelfSkewed talk contribs 8,872 bytes +26‎ →Integral theory: dab link undo

9 July 2024

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8 July 2024

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27 June 2024

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23 July 2023

• curprev 00:1800:18, 23 July 2023 Ensa talk contribs m 8,323 bytes −1‎ "How American Can..."-->"How America Can..." [Dropped 'n' from second word in title, misspelled.] undo

23 November 2022

• curprev 16:5116:51, 23 November 2022 Citation bot talk contribs 8,324 bytes +49‎ Add: s2cid, doi. | Use this bot. Report bugs. | Suggested by Whoop whoop pull up | #UCB_webform 1129/1223 undo

20 August 2022

• curprev 21:3221:32, 20 August 2022 Citation bot talk contribs 8,275 bytes +25‎ Alter: title, pages. Formatted dashes. | Use this bot. Report bugs. | Suggested by BrownHairedGirl | #UCB_webform 2499/3820 undo

27 February 2022

• curprev 16:2416:24, 27 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:cc39:cd27:2ba4:dfc7 talk 8,250 bytes +67‎ →Professional life: Handed over the business to his wife, according to citation, closed retail arm, stating that they were focusing on online sales. Digital store front now defunct. Unclear of the status of the company. undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 16:1216:12, 27 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:cc39:cd27:2ba4:dfc7 talk 8,183 bytes −102‎ →Integral theory: This is not a citation, it is a link to the publisher's general website. I suspect the editor of this page either does not yet know that citations should be referenced and how to construct them, or wanted to link to the website but was prohibited by Wiki. Happy to help. Instead I will properly link to the actual book and cite. undo Tags: references removed Visual edit
• curprev 16:0816:08, 27 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:cc39:cd27:2ba4:dfc7 talk 8,285 bytes +12‎ →Professional life: Closed the retail store. Said it was a gradual scaling back of the business. undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 16:0616:06, 27 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:cc39:cd27:2ba4:dfc7 talk 8,273 bytes +26‎ →Professional life: closed shop in 2012. Went online. Website now non functional. All products are sold out and have been for some time. Just a digital placeholder. undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 16:0116:01, 27 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:cc39:cd27:2ba4:dfc7 talk 8,247 bytes +17‎ →Professional life: added description of what Now & Zen is and edited for grammar. undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 16:0016:00, 27 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:cc39:cd27:2ba4:dfc7 talk 8,230 bytes +11‎ →Professional life: The citation is a description of a newpaper article that can't be located. All of these suggests that notability is weak. Yes, there is notability for these books, despite small circulation, but there is not strong notability for his professional career before and many of the citations placed are non existent or dead. undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:5015:50, 27 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:589c:b16c:2749:620a talk 8,219 bytes +5‎ Integral thought it is not a field, it is a subject. Changed for clarity. undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:4815:48, 27 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:589c:b16c:2749:620a talk 8,214 bytes +1‎ Changed tense from is to was undo
• curprev 15:4715:47, 27 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:589c:b16c:2749:620a talk 8,213 bytes +153‎ Fixed citation. Linked to citation. Removed quote in citation as it is inappropriate. undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:3215:32, 27 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:589c:b16c:2749:620a talk 8,060 bytes +23‎ added that Now & Zen is an alarm clock company and placed the citation at the appropriate place at the end of the sentence. undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:3015:30, 27 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:589c:b16c:2749:620a talk 8,037 bytes +145‎ →Bibliography: Added link and complete title. undo Tag: Visual edit

26 February 2022

• curprev 16:4816:48, 26 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:4949:819c:df81:f9fe talk 7,892 bytes −69‎ →Education: being an article editor for a law review is not what he is notable for. It also does not have a citation. Again, this should focus on notability. Adding personal details to lengthen the article or tell a story is not appropriate on an encyclopedia. undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 16:4616:46, 26 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:4949:819c:df81:f9fe talk 7,961 bytes +6‎ →Education: added his last name instead of pronoun. undo
• curprev 16:4516:45, 26 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:4949:819c:df81:f9fe talk 7,955 bytes −2‎ →Integral movement: renamed section to Integral Theory. The word movement doesn't match the reality of a small subgroup. undo
• curprev 15:5515:55, 26 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:2d00:2ad6:f0d0:817 talk 7,957 bytes −13‎ →Education: Left the title education, removed the title early life. This section is about his education. He is not notable for his early life. This is not a famous person's page. undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:5315:53, 26 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:2d00:2ad6:f0d0:817 talk 7,970 bytes −1‎ →Early life and education: removed a space. undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:5315:53, 26 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:2d00:2ad6:f0d0:817 talk 7,971 bytes +6‎ added his last name instead of "he" for greater clarity undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:5215:52, 26 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:2d00:2ad6:f0d0:817 talk 7,965 bytes −1,647‎ →Bibliography: These articles are not a bibliography in that they are already cited in the text (I've made sure to do so). But listing them out here is not appropriate and you cannot include blogs. undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:5015:50, 26 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:2d00:2ad6:f0d0:817 talk 9,612 bytes +1,103‎ →Integral movement: The best way to showcase articles of a relatively less known author is through citations in the body of the text. It's uncommon to have a list of opinion pieces in relatively unknown publications listed as a Bibliography. I've inserted these all in the text as is customary. No blogs will be allowed. undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:4215:42, 26 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:2d00:2ad6:f0d0:817 talk 8,509 bytes −58‎ →Early life and education: Again, it is not notable where McIntosh was born. I don't think you can merely revert without engaging on the talk page. That's not how it's done. If you dispute this, engage on the talk page like Wikipedians do. I've left my reason here... debate them. undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:3215:32, 26 February 2022 Fade258 talk contribs 8,567 bytes +1‎ →Bibliography undo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• curprev 15:3115:31, 26 February 2022 Fade258 talk contribs 8,566 bytes −6‎ Undid revision 1074127935 by 2603:8001:6A01:FA5E:2D00:2AD6:F0D0:817 (talk) undo Tags: Undo Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• curprev 15:2815:28, 26 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:2d00:2ad6:f0d0:817 talk 8,572 bytes +6‎ →Bibliography undo Tag: Reverted
• curprev 15:2715:27, 26 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:2d00:2ad6:f0d0:817 talk 8,566 bytes −500‎ →Bibliography: Blogs are not notable and not acceptable on Wikipedia. Please. undo
• curprev 15:2515:25, 26 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:2d00:2ad6:f0d0:817 talk 9,066 bytes −116‎ →Integral movement undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:1615:16, 26 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:2d00:2ad6:f0d0:817 talk 9,182 bytes −295‎ Character exercise not notable. No major press outlets are carrying this. undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:1215:12, 26 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:2d00:2ad6:f0d0:817 talk 9,477 bytes −11‎ →Integral movement: "Received write ups"... Again, inflated. An article was written. It's not like this Institute is so famous that review are flying. It's not Yelp. It's fine to leave it, but let's be mindful of language. undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:0915:09, 26 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:2d00:2ad6:f0d0:817 talk 9,488 bytes −219‎ →Integral movement: Numerous articles, when one is cited. This is a page suffering from inflation of notability. undo Tags: references removed Visual edit
• curprev 15:0615:06, 26 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:2d00:2ad6:f0d0:817 talk 9,707 bytes −93‎ →Professional life: The first law firm that he worked for is not notable, nor is it cited. If there were an article on the notable legal work of McIntosh, this would be a different story. undo
• curprev 15:0515:05, 26 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:2d00:2ad6:f0d0:817 talk 9,800 bytes −2‎ →Integral movement: Calling integral theory a movement is a bit of an overstatement. Yes, I know their readership world wide. A movement is the Arab Spring, or the free knowledge movement. Integral theory is not a movement. I struggle with the overstatements and inflated notability of this page. undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:0115:01, 26 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:2d00:2ad6:f0d0:817 talk 9,802 bytes −62‎ →Professional life: It is not notable when he left a job. It is not notable that a clock company is in Colorado. Please, use this site for encyclopedic knowledge. For storytelling and image bolstering, there are personal websites and Twitter. This should be only about the things that McIntosh is notable for, of which there are few that are commented on in main stream press. undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 14:5914:59, 26 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:2d00:2ad6:f0d0:817 talk 9,864 bytes −34‎ →Professional life: His move to Boulder is not notable. Please people. Notability, due weight. Again, this is not social media or marketing. This is an encyclopedia. undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 14:5814:58, 26 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:2d00:2ad6:f0d0:817 talk 9,898 bytes −55‎ →Professional life: McIntosh, if notable, is certainly not notable as a lawyer. There are not multiple articles in well-known publications about his legal work. If someone is notable for something, it's not for everything. I suspect that Steve is writing this himself. undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 14:5614:56, 26 February 2022 2603:8001:6a01:fa5e:2d00:2ad6:f0d0:817 talk 9,953 bytes −57‎ →Early life and education: If this person is notable, which is debatable, certainly his parents and where they are from... in not notable. This looks like trying to fill up a bunch of information to make a relatively unknown person, seem really notable. undo Tag: Visual edit

10 February 2022

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20 January 2022

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29 December 2021

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18 November 2021

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13 August 2021

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23 May 2021

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11 May 2021

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1 June 2020

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